After the North got back the Gift crops were being crown more freely and coin wasn't spent all on food anymore. Ned Stark surprised everyone by beginning a ten year reconstruction of Moat Cailin. Probably wants to give the keep to one of his sons.
Even if it was sabotage, it's still something that could have happened anyway
Eidolon is remembering the events of Civil Wars in the comics. The last fuse of the Whole problem is a bunch of youngsters filming some sort of program playing the hero. Ended up blowing many kids because of their negligence and inexperience.
The story idea is okay, but the adding of a system kinda ruins it, along with the some what cringe dialogue and the mistakes in names and weapons.
WQ:2
SD: 2
CD:2
US: 4
WB:3
From the bow of the ship, Whitebeard raised his sword with force, slamming it onto the deck. He looked down at Magellan condescendingly and let out a hearty laugh.
A pack of lean wolves came to the party first, and I threw them the offal, only keeping the brains, livers, tongues, and hearts for my own use. They happily took the offering and left to dine in peace. Filthy fucking animals. Anyone ascribing 'nobility' to wolves deserves the terror they inflict on them.
The story is good, but it's lacking in any real substance. It's also has the same problems most if not all of the author's works, which are some bad grammer and using ' ' for speak.
WQ:3
SD: 3
CD:3
US:4
WB:2
The crowd went ballistics. A woman won the tourney in front of them. Proving once again that women are not just meant to lie still and think about Dragonstone.
I love the story so far, but it has a few problems. Which are mostly some poor grammer problems and using ' ' for speak which is off putting.
WQ: 3
SD:4
CD:4
US:4
WB:3