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GonFreaks1001yrCommentedCh 70 Chapter 70- GonFreaks1001yrCommented
It is getting harder and harder to swallow your psycho character. I like the premise of the story and the way you are changing things, killing people happens in war and I am sure they are more used to death than the story showed. It was usually only the avatar that was all goody goody.
Ch 69 Chapter 69: Generational Fight - GonFreaks1003yrCommented
I hope that was some foreshadowing of the next world, especially since he did not want to follow the laws. Since the governments of SW universe were all corrupt in one way or another, so doing what you want there would be awesome to see, imo.
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not sure if it is wrong, but "messing thing's out", does not sound correct to US speaking person's. It would be "messing things up."
{Next plan. Learn more spells while practicing Wingardium Leviosa. I guess I can just ask the RoR to summon some books to learn charms and curses. I also need to be able to use both Wingardium Leviosa and other spells at the same time, without messing things out.} - GonFreaks1003yrCommented
uummmm... would he not research the bubble head charm since was an issue in the 4th book of Harry Potter, and I am sure he knows of it?
From mountainous places to snowy ones, heck, I even summoned a freaking lake-like pool, with plants and everything inside. For that one, I first mixed my Magic Shield skill, only because I wanted to shield myself from decompression syndrome. Sadly, I didn't have any way to breathe underwater, making it necessary for me to hold my breath as much as possible while I learned some charm or spell for it. - GonFreaks1003yrReplied to I_am_potato_lord
Sorry, I have no dicord acct. or any clue on how to use it. will take some time to access. thanks.
He knew the second one very well. He was the son of his late teacher and the last full-blooded Uzumaki on Konoha. His time as an Anbu operative had often led him to missions such as guarding the latter at times. - GonFreaks1003yrReplied to I_am_potato_lord
I have been looking for your story on the internet but am unable to find it. I do not know how to get access to wherever you moved your story to. Hope you don't mind helping me find it.
He knew the second one very well. He was the son of his late teacher and the last full-blooded Uzumaki on Konoha. His time as an Anbu operative had often led him to missions such as guarding the latter at times. - GonFreaks1003yrCommentedCh 22 CHAPTER 21 – A decision is made
- GonFreaks1003yrReplied to mugen95
yup saw your specification you made in the following chapters. Ty for responding.
Max was on his bed, which was a bunk-bed which he had to share it with another boy, reading about the different animals and birds. He already knew he made a good choice by getting the power of a gorilla because its the strongest animal considering the weight ratio it can lift, pull and push to its body weight,mass and its size. But the only thing is that he couldn't use it as he didn't know how. He kept trying to bring out the gorilla's or atleast his inbuilt goat power; that's what he called them now; but nothing happened. - GonFreaks1003yrCommented
From this description I am thinking of Kong fighting Godzilla in the new movie with a giant axe!!!
Tyson borrowed the rune chisel and worked the gems into the handle of the Axe. The blood red gems turned colour to blue and yellow. "The blue gem gives it the ability to stay sharp and fix itself indefinitely, drawing energy and the necessary power from you. The yellow one has the ability to resize the Axe for your comfort. But the most interesting thing of all is the runes in the branch/handle." Tyson said pointing at the glowing ruins. - GonFreaks1003yrReplied to math877n
OMG, yes! TY for saying it!
"The curse of Pan... - GonFreaks1003yrCommented
isn't it like a staff with an eye.
There was a collective gasps as two identical black symbols floated on top of the twin's heads. {a.n.- Pls google it. difficult to explain.} "Welcome to Camp half-blood children of Hades, Bianca and Nico De Angelo." - GonFreaks1003yrReplied to AngelKnightZed
nice catch, I missed it.
"Now let's see how those that were so smug while you were about to fail perform. I expect great things from them." She threw a cold look to a few students that went immediately pale. - GonFreaks1003yrReplied to AidoneusCorvinus
lol. slimy, you do know they are not slimy or moist.
Before boarding the bus he double-backed to the zoo and rescued the snake he drifted with. He didn't know why but something kept bothering him not to leave her behind. Yeah she was a female, with a slender lime green body, which fascinated Max as he wondered how she would hide in the wild with such a bright coloured body. She willingly slithered into his sleeves when he went to get her. - GonFreaks1003yrCommented
It is Dung Beetle, then Rhinocerus beetle, then Leafcutter Ant, and then Gorilla. I was going to say ant, but google corrected my wrong answer.
Max was on his bed, which was a bunk-bed which he had to share it with another boy, reading about the different animals and birds. He already knew he made a good choice by getting the power of a gorilla because its the strongest animal considering the weight ratio it can lift, pull and push to its body weight,mass and its size. But the only thing is that he couldn't use it as he didn't know how. He kept trying to bring out the gorilla's or atleast his inbuilt goat power; that's what he called them now; but nothing happened. - GonFreaks1003yrReplied to DaoistSleepyHead
maybe he is thinking of powdering his nose.
'Nani the fuck! How I offended you all. I don't have any interest in these small lolis. Honestly, aren't you all too young to think about such matters? In my previous world due to modernization this could be considered normal, but here it looks weird. But I can guess the sentiment of these sheltered kids. Also, do all of you honestly believe that they will flour me.' - GonFreaks1003yrCommented
'of the Konoha' is incorrect. Should be 'of Konoha.' or better yet 'of Konohagakure no sato.' I would think for a speech and official setting they would use the full name not an abbreviation.
"But before that, Our Respected Hokage-Sama will give a speech to the future ninjas of the Konoha." - GonFreaks1003yrCommented
ok... 'their' is incorrect in this use, it should be 'there' but would also be best if you swap out the word all together and replace it with a coma.
Next day we arrived early in the morning. There were lots of children gathered in the front training ground of the Academy waiting for the commemoration of ceremony. After half an hour, when all of the students were present their the ceremony started.