This is good. Will you do the POV with all the people who live Xandar like the unsullied or the farmers.

This looks good, I’m curious to see how powerful jun is and how he develops. What grade is fang and does jun have the potential to make special grade cursed spirits?.

Kenta, meaning healthy or strong. This looks good and meeting with kenjaku yessss. We need more villain type oc’s (or anti hero’s) for the jjk fanfics Do you have a schedule for updating?

So they have chrollo’s power, I never thought about his powes in jjk. Interesting, I like it. Do you have a schedule for updating fic.

I think you should do the first year meeting and build up the relationships, so just time skip to when geto turns 15. Is he going to keep the limitless a secret.

Not really as Quinn has already destroyed 2? Of the horcruxs, and with the path he is going on probably more. Killing the ringleader (Voldemort) will make it easier to end the war

Is kaya going to build her own Peerage cause she is half devil and almost a High Class. I Think this would be a good way To have her build a ‘family’ Of people that she can care for like her father. Also if she Is going to join a pEerage can it be sOna’s. these are just suggestions. i love this plot.