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i love this book. pleasers I need more! give it to meee! lol honestly I shook my fist into the air. your doing an amazing job. only input I say is when we see the Anthony's status to show where he was last to to where he is now.to see how much growth. I can only imagine how many things you have to keep track of number wise, plot wise, and so much more. but I love this... the fact you made it free is a god send. thank you so much. I appreciate all your hard work. I can't wait for the next chapter. FOR THE COLONY!!!!
excuse me auther, just my opinion. but maybe you should discribe how the coy fish transforms, details... what dose he look like? did he have to do it while in the water? was it a smooth transition? is it a special power for monsters to transform into humans? hair color eye color what color is his skin? dose he have clothes on? little details like this is what makes story's a step above another. and I love this story so far .I hope you read this and take my opinion into consideration.