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firepheonix2yrCommentedHe then took out a monster. It looked like a bird, but its feathers were pitch black. It had the shape of a hawk. etc etc i think this would flow better
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the lightning and fire magic feel a bit forced with the only intro being in the status of arthur. but eh, thats j my opinion
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eat the egg with the beasts ;) make an omelette
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holy fk
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consume? whats that? where was it mentioned, if it was?
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im guessing thats a unit that exists, like strength and vit. if so, can we get an example of the average stats for normal ppl and other paladins? also, is there a reason why only magic is shown? (sorry for the many questions)
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alr then, i was j asking bc some ppl dont want help
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i think the first empire was supposed to b smth else
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this would work better imo them are not. Greed, lust. gluttony, etc etc
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not all -> not everything sorry if u dont want these types of corrections. is it fine if i correct ur grammar or spelling?
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the divine beings r churches?
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"Alright then. I'll try to hammer the basics into you by the time the breaks done." I said, accepting her resolve. - firepheonix2yrReplied to GoldBySilver
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"I already told you, but those are nothing but dreams, so please, stop talking about them. In case you can't sleep, how about you help me with these to divert your attention?" She said with a kind smile - firepheonix2yrReplied to Abadom
oh ok
When Hestia told me about the Denatus, of course, she told me about the challenge from Leto. - firepheonix2yrReplied to Abadom
it was j a suggestion bc theres a lot of missing dots
"?... Don't tell me… Do you have it?!" Said Loiju - firepheonix2yrReplied to
ah ok
"?... Don't tell me… Do you have it?!" Said Loiju - firepheonix2yrReplied to Abadom
huh...interesting, thanks
"I know why you two came here, and this is enough proof." Said Rehmer - firepheonix2yrReplied to RagingDrake
yah...my bad im dum lol
I was pretty sure I just stood there for like 20 minutes just mulling over which one to choose. Ultimately, I chose Ralts because his talent had so many possibilities. So, him having to train an extra 2-3 years was negligible, especially since I was still young and my official journey was still far off. - firepheonix2yrReplied to Azrail93
ah...my bad. i should have looked at it closer. i j assumed there were three ralts and forgot that he was taken to the other area
I was pretty sure I just stood there for like 20 minutes just mulling over which one to choose. Ultimately, I chose Ralts because his talent had so many possibilities. So, him having to train an extra 2-3 years was negligible, especially since I was still young and my official journey was still far off.