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OFWAR

OFWAR

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2020-10-16 JoinedUnited States
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  • OFWAR
    OFWAR29d
    Commented

    | V "he isn't mature if he's jumping like that" ... ... ya'll just depressed

    Though he was just 13, he had matured faster than most youths. The absence of a parental figure in his life had left him to fend off on his own, turning him into a responsible adult.
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    God´s Eyes
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    OFWAR5mth
    Commented

    ctenophore:

    Then the heavy hitters started coming, one looked like a ctenophore the size of a house, I tried to hit it with essence but it simply bounced back to me, I tried to attack it some more but it seemed to be invulnerable to slow attacks, so I started increasing the rate of my shots and avoiding them as they came back, soon enough some shots went through and started damaging it.
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    OFWAR6mth
    Replied to Tuupkagtroth

    you may lack the aforementioned humanity

    In retrospect, he was the one who allowed her into the house. He basically put himself in his current situation. But then again, it's not like he foresaw the global outbreak to happen, and his humanity just couldn't allow himself to send Arisu to the streets where she'd definitely die.
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    OFWAR9mth
    Replied to guzzlinggasoline

    i mean, lucifer was supposed to be the best angel, with his only downside being jealousy, i think (it's been a long time since i read the bible)

    {Skills: Perseverance (Level-1), Mana breathing (Level-1)}
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    OFWAR1yr
    Commented

    laughn't 💀

    Although Angela already had a glimpse of the people inside, her eyes still completely followed the several helicopters that landed only meters away from them. How could she not, when she finally realized that the reporters were faster at responding than the people of the law?
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    OFWAR1yr
    Commented

    A helicoprion looks like this

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  • OFWAR
    OFWAR1yr
    Replied to Dontknow00

    thanks for reading my novel!

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  • OFWAR
    OFWAR1yr
    Commented

    Kinda like this

    I showed it my hand morphing, and then it seemed to had learned somehow and transformed into a humanoid with white skin, unnatural features, horns,membrane wings and a smile in its face.
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    OFWAR1yr
    Replied to _KAIZER_

    thank you for reading my book! I didn't realize that it was actually written immortal at first 😅. But when I tried to change the name I realized that it was already used, so for the past few days I have been thinking about whether to change it to something else or not.

    Ch 22 Cadamni's training... (Part three)
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    OFWAR1yr
    Replied to Tony510

    yeah, sorry. Thanks for reading my novel!

    There was a pair of unusual eyes: they where completely black but they had countless lights shining in them, as if one was looking at a galaxy.
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    OFWAR1yr
    Replied to SrLao

    sorry for not replying, I didn't look into the reviews of the novel 😅 I updated the synopsis today because i realized that what you said in this comment is true.

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    OFWAR1yr
    Replied to OFWAR

    the dragon looks like this, but I'm not good at drawing.

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    OFWAR1yr
    Replied to SrLao

    well, i have been putting a little bit more of effort into him, but I'll start to try to make them both as interesting.

    Ch 9 Cadamni's training.
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    OFWAR1yr
    Replied to OFWAR

    though I understand if you don't like it, he will only weaken himself for experimentation

    Ch 10 Exploring the planet.
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    OFWAR1yr
    Replied to SrLao

    thanks for the critique, I see his weakened state as just a way to control his strength. I think I didn't explain it properly enough in the chapter Though, by controlling his strength he can make his body equal to that of a human. later on in the chapter he regenerates his stamina instantly after the fight is over. and in the end of the chapter he uses strength bigger than a human to lift corpses.

    Ch 10 Exploring the planet.
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    OFWAR1yr
    Commented

    Quark elementary particles that make up hadrons (like protons and neutrons) in the Standard Model of particle physics

    Hmmm, I see. It seems as though the energy is produced in a way similar to breathing, absorbing something similar to the quarks of my universe and absorbing the energy from them.
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    OFWAR1yr
    Commented
    stats increase exponentially, meaning a body of 20 is way stronger than 19.
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    OFWAR1yr
    Commented
    (is that a Elasmotherium? no, it's bigger and fiercer than that. though they look similar)
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    OFWAR1yr
    Replied to SrLao

    muchas gracias por tu comentario, en cuanto al personaje principal pienso en hacer que el tenga un desarrollo satisfactorio pero no puedo entrar en detalles. intentare hacer mas capítulos y mejorar la historia.

    Ch 5 Confusing humanity.
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    OFWAR1yr
    Posted

    hello guys author here, please leave a review and comment in the chapters if you are reading this it would be of great help to me and I would greatly appreciate it.

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