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2020-10-09 JoinedUnited Kingdom
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    Spy_2yr
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    "Yes and no." Doevm's interactions with the demis really goes to show his character growth over the course of this book. Obviously he's no Saint, but he's at least doing his best for a group of people that has no direct benefit for him. Even all of the information they've given him is something he could have learned on his own in situ if need be. I can tell that your writing style is becoming more and more distinct- characters all have unique voices, background details are made relevant, and nothing feels like it's totally new and unheard of information, just things that we as readers missed. If you are a reader, go back to C1 and reread it. There are so many bits of foreshadowing that I didn't notice until my second go through!

    Ch 326 Final Final Cliffhanger, an apology
    A Bored Lich
    Fantasy · Random_writer
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    Spy_2yr
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    This chapter reminded me so much of why I prefer this book over most of the others. Random_writer's style can pack some truly emotional punches, and it feels like all the little bits of info we've been fed throughout the buildup comes to a head. I'm already anxious tor the next chapter, and excited for the rest of the story.

    Ch 324 The Final Cliffhanger (part 1/2)
    A Bored Lich
    Fantasy · Random_writer
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    Spy_2yr
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    The word here is "hoarse" instead of "horse". Hoarse means raspy, like if you had a sore throat, while horse is the animal. Also, I absolutely love this story!!

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    A Bored Lich
    Fantasy · Random_writer
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    Spy_2yr
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    It seems like the sentences flow more smoothly than before, but the original quality of writing was already very high. Keep up the good work!

    Ch 858 I Can Sense Her
    Is that a Wisp?
    Eastern · Suiyan
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    Spy_2yr
    Commented

    Glad to have you back, friendo. I hope your finals went well, and your summer is relatively stress free!

    Ch 315 You Either Die a Hero or...
    A Bored Lich
    Fantasy · Random_writer
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    Spy_2yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

    Ch 1 The Abnormal Day
    Unsealing Emptiness
    Eastern · Bird_0f_Hermes
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    Spy_3yr
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    So if they have kids... Will their kid be a Tianoboa cerrejonensis?

    "Titanblood," Tycon explained casually... "Bloodline of giants-- possibly old-world Cyclops. The latter could explain your ability to speak to things that don't normally... do that."
    Headed by a Snake
    Fantasy · CouchSurfingDragon
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    Spy_3yr
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    I just went internet point bankrupt. I had figured it was Mr. Wroe making an appearance on demand

    "CaAAaLL... mee... iShhh-MaAael..."
    Headed by a Snake
    Fantasy · CouchSurfingDragon
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    Spy_3yr
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    Is there a narrative reason he's being called and referred to as "Tyco" as opposed to "Tycon"?

    Tyco narrowed his yellow eyes... but they grew out of focus, as if he were staring a thousand-yalms away. The magic was designed to be subtle, so there weren't any other noticeable effects... but Benji had no reason to believe it didn't work. 
    Headed by a Snake
    Fantasy · CouchSurfingDragon
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    Spy_3yr
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    Wait... Is this the Ocarina of Time water temple?!

    "In case you've forgotten," Ophelia pointed at her tapered ears, "I am an *elf*, Tycon. You won't be winning any word games with me. Do you EVEN own a single pair of iron boots? A hookshot?"
    Headed by a Snake
    Fantasy · CouchSurfingDragon
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    Spy_3yr
    Replied to Folk_hall

    I had assumed aurae was plural, is that not the case?

    Ch 43 Unconscious But Safe
    The Demon Monarch System
    Fantasy · Syphiinz
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    Spy_3yr
    Commented

    Fallout 4, Far Harbor, Maiden of the Mist

    Ch 189 The Dark _____?!
    Unsealing Emptiness
    Eastern · Bird_0f_Hermes
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    Spy_3yr
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    Bruh what? If it takes 3 hours for a limb you best believe I'm walking outta that place like muhf**kin Doc Oc

    "Well, it may take up to three hours making functional limbs."- Mr. Smith gave his estimate. It was a magical world, with enough materials, unimaginable things were no longer impossible. He also took Ozuls measurements for the prosthetics.
    Unsealing Emptiness
    Eastern · Bird_0f_Hermes
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    Spy_3yr
    Replied to Empryean

    Not when you consider humanity has several PLANETS they've colonized

    "At least you can watch the video on the web. It already has 1 million views even though it was only uploaded 5 minutes ago!"
    The Great Demon System
    Fantasy · Drip
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    Spy_3yr
    Replied to Injustice

    Now we just need the author to add that too so the MC can start making some sensible decisions

    30 points in Intelligence.
    The Great Demon System
    Fantasy · Drip
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    Spy_3yr
    Commented

    You said he looked in a mirror earlier, but he hasn't net anyone more annoying?

    The time they used was very efficient. They discovered many things in the process. But, all good things must come at a cost. The last 3 hours were the most frustrating and rage-inducing time Moby had ever felt. He had never met someone so annoying in his entire life.
    The Great Demon System
    Fantasy · Drip
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    Spy_3yr
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    This dude is like an infant wielding an anti tank rifle. The kit he has is so vastly overtuned you'd think Riot designed him.

    After a few more experiments, Moby figured out that their mind link can be used for telepathic communication from any distance which is a huge asset.
    The Great Demon System
    Fantasy · Drip
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    Spy_3yr
    Replied to SemiDemiHemiEvil

    So he had the money to buy games but not a taxi?

    "Ya pretty much, just imagine it like a 30% debuff from an RPG. "
    The Great Demon System
    Fantasy · Drip
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    Spy_3yr
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    I wonder if Avila will tell him?

    Every time she attempted to try something on Moby, It was like an unknown force in her head stopped her from doing it. It was like the time she tried to attack him before feeling like she was tied down by invisible chains.
    The Great Demon System
    Fantasy · Drip
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    Spy_3yr
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    How can enslaving another human to be your undetectable thrall be a bad thing? Like, even if you're a Saint, having another set of hands to help with your saintly duties would help, right?

    Moby took in everything that Avilia said. At first, he thought that this demon household thing would be a hindrance and an inconvenience. But, after hearing that there are benefits he instantly thought differently.
    The Great Demon System
    Fantasy · Drip
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