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"Yes and no." Doevm's interactions with the demis really goes to show his character growth over the course of this book. Obviously he's no Saint, but he's at least doing his best for a group of people that has no direct benefit for him. Even all of the information they've given him is something he could have learned on his own in situ if need be. I can tell that your writing style is becoming more and more distinct- characters all have unique voices, background details are made relevant, and nothing feels like it's totally new and unheard of information, just things that we as readers missed. If you are a reader, go back to C1 and reread it. There are so many bits of foreshadowing that I didn't notice until my second go through!
This chapter reminded me so much of why I prefer this book over most of the others. Random_writer's style can pack some truly emotional punches, and it feels like all the little bits of info we've been fed throughout the buildup comes to a head. I'm already anxious tor the next chapter, and excited for the rest of the story.
The word here is "hoarse" instead of "horse". Hoarse means raspy, like if you had a sore throat, while horse is the animal. Also, I absolutely love this story!!
So if they have kids... Will their kid be a Tianoboa cerrejonensis?
I just went internet point bankrupt. I had figured it was Mr. Wroe making an appearance on demand
Is there a narrative reason he's being called and referred to as "Tyco" as opposed to "Tycon"?
Wait... Is this the Ocarina of Time water temple?!
Bruh what? If it takes 3 hours for a limb you best believe I'm walking outta that place like muhf**kin Doc Oc
Not when you consider humanity has several PLANETS they've colonized
Now we just need the author to add that too so the MC can start making some sensible decisions
You said he looked in a mirror earlier, but he hasn't net anyone more annoying?
This dude is like an infant wielding an anti tank rifle. The kit he has is so vastly overtuned you'd think Riot designed him.
So he had the money to buy games but not a taxi?
I wonder if Avila will tell him?
How can enslaving another human to be your undetectable thrall be a bad thing? Like, even if you're a Saint, having another set of hands to help with your saintly duties would help, right?