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LUNJALIEN_HAOKIP2yrPostedthe grammar is soooo bad,I don't understand half of what I'm reading... it really gets annoying. please recheck all the chaptes and get a good translator or something. the story is really great but the grammar ruins it all
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the grammar is soooo bad,it's hard to understand what they're trying to say
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wdf that's almost same with a bus at full speed at normal speed it can travel 50-60 km in an hour, a bike can travel 80-90 km in an hour wdf is all this ,makes no sense
The Wind Cheetah was the fastest magical beast on the continent. Its speed could reach over a hundred kilometers per hour. - LUNJALIEN_HAOKIP2yrCommented
my god make some differences between the paragraphs,it's so confusing to read
However, from now on, her service projects were slightly different. - LUNJALIEN_HAOKIP2yrCommented
seriously what's with the tier's,I thought ttier 5 was the highest wdf is with the novel
Therefore, there was a saying that it was called City Protector Tier-Six Magister, Border Protector Tier-Seven Magister, Kingdom Protector Eight Magister!! - LUNJALIEN_HAOKIP2yrCommented
gireya
His hair grew crazily, then hardened like sharp needles before finally shooting out. - LUNJALIEN_HAOKIP2yrCommented
omg 😳
Blushing, Catherine lowered her head and mumbled, "How? You've never smelled it before…" - LUNJALIEN_HAOKIP2yrCommented
😳
Although she's my sister, I think it's my first time being alone with her. - LUNJALIEN_HAOKIP2yrCommentedCh 4 Chapter 4
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what does father/mother of convenience mean,I don't get it
Ling Jiu forced a smile. This father of convenience had got a big ego. "Could you please listen to what I have to say? It is not much, just about five billion dollars. I have used one billion and left with four billion dollars!" - LUNJALIEN_HAOKIP3yrCommented
fok,what a turn off
This paragraph has been deleted. - LUNJALIEN_HAOKIP3yrReplied to Winters_Rain
- LUNJALIEN_HAOKIP3yrCommentedCh 9 Chapter 8
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I'm still not clear with what his Raven is for, is it still because of the girl?? or the Lord she slept with ?
Draco was conflicted. He was evil, but that was only because he was doing everything to gain revenge. He justified all his actions based on his hatred. - LUNJALIEN_HAOKIP3yrReplied to nononononfkfkfkfk
he's a demon that's not surprising
"Fuck No!" Moby immediately retorted, making her laugh. - LUNJALIEN_HAOKIP3yrReplied to nononononfkfkfkfk
there's some novels which use the word,and i don't mind it,but the way it's used here is like those stupid kids in real life from the streets or from someplaces who don't understand what explicit words are and just use them as if it's common, normal or okay to use them, readers mostly don't use them as commonly and if it's used just as common here the the nxt writer might think it's ok . but it's not.. there's right nd wrong and the rest is just your own opinion but when something becomes too common, people become confused. we should draw the line as writers
"Fuck No!" Moby immediately retorted, making her laugh.