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DaoistSniper3yrCommentedCh 1 Chapter 1. Return- DaoistSniper3yrPosted
The story is great and good but I just found it odd how it's different(in a good way of course.) This gives me a feeling of uniqueness when reading a story. Such good book deserves really the no. 47th place at that time. However I guess it's not too late to find some editors or use some grammar check apps. It would really be a great help.
- DaoistSniper3yrReplied to ToonwormCh 1 Chapter 1. Return
- DaoistSniper3yrCommented
This is quite unique. As he doesn't have a system to help out.
"I am really in the past. I died, and I returned to the past." - DaoistSniper3yrReplied to L1485
Welp. I guess the author should apply some editor or so (maybe find some grammar apps?) 🤔. This keeps piling up😗
"Didn't you got a role in a movie called «Secret Spy»" - DaoistSniper3yrCommented
Yeah do you?
"Why are you staring at me? You are really acting weird today. Do you have a nightmare or something?" - DaoistSniper3yrCommented
This is just last year.
'17 July 2019.' - DaoistSniper3yrCommented
This would really be me if I'd be given that kind of a chance too
'I look young again.' - DaoistSniper3yrCommented
Aww. Poor little guy.
At that time, he had no money to pay for her operation, so she had died because of that. He still blames himself for that. - DaoistSniper3yrCommented
This is it.
Ren groaned as he felt something shaking his shoulder. His eyes were exhausted. He just wanted to sleep for eternity. - DaoistSniper3yrReplied to eclairsshiCh 106 Chapter 104. Eunha (4)
- DaoistSniper3yrReplied to Beeruss"I'm just thinking of making a quick profit. Oh, yeah, inform some reporters that I would be having dinner with them today. I need to give them a juicy news!"
- DaoistSniper3yrPosted
As I've been catching up with the latest chapter. I could say the story is good and excellent. The only drawback are some typos and wrong name placement which sometimes make the story confusing. So I do recommend everyone who would read the story have some patience as the story is good and have nice characters. The lyrics and plot are quite original. And the way of the story flow is unique which as a whole it overshadowed the mistakes in the story. So overall I would give it a 4.5 star but I'll just round it up to be 5.
- DaoistSniper3yrCommented
Why so soon...
"You will know soon." - DaoistSniper3yrCommented
Just why...
"I'm just thinking of making a quick profit. Oh, yeah, inform some reporters that I would be having dinner with them today. I need to give them a juicy news!" - DaoistSniper3yrCommented
This emoji is just cute[img=faceslap]
<Damn! Did you all saw this? He made a pretty big mistake there.> - DaoistSniper3yrCommented
Too much normal I guess.
"You look really normal for a President." - DaoistSniper3yrCommented
Guess a typo.
2:00 midnight