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DeleTED

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  • DeleTED
    DeleTED3yr
    Posted

    This is so horrible. I usually don't waste my time writing bad reviews, but this is just too much. I can't believe that every f*cking Chinese author likes this cliche sh*t. No creativity at all. Why translate this trash? This won't bring any popularity and money at all. A waste of time. Webnovel should say a thank you to original authors. The original section is the only hope. Translated works won't keep this sh*t floating anymore. Please give us quality or just stop it.

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    The Earth Is My Dantian
    Eastern · Girl in Short Skirt
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  • DeleTED
    DeleTED3yr
    Replied to DeleTED

    Edit: The novel is not that good, but not too bad either

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    Big Data Cultivation
    Urban · Chen Fengxiao
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  • DeleTED
    DeleTED3yr
    Posted

    The novel is good, but please don't give it bad ratings just because you want 60 chapters instead of 40. The novel has nothing to do with that. You just ruin the ratings of the novel.

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    Big Data Cultivation
    Urban · Chen Fengxiao
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  • DeleTED
    DeleTED3yr
    Commented

    Are you telling me he practiced this route? From one cliff to another above a thousands of meters deep ravine? The world can't hold your balls man!

    Ch 1 Demon Tamer
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    Release That Demonic Pet
    Eastern · Maple Frost
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  • DeleTED
    DeleTED3yr
    Replied to Nekomata_Shoji

    Ty for the review, this novel is on hiatus for now, but I will definitely start again once I finished with my other novel.

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    The Swindler Mage(Hiatus)
    Fantasy · DeleTED
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  • DeleTED
    DeleTED3yr
    Commented

    no need to make such a fuss over clothing. Let him just buy it. This ain't happening in real life. The novel is good but this scene was overreacted.

    Ch 5 Buying Clothes
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    God of Investment
    Urban · Get_Diabetes
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  • DeleTED
    DeleTED3yr
    Commented

    I feel like Xiao Meng is secretly a cat.

    Ch 4 Warmth
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    God of Investment
    Urban · Get_Diabetes
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  • DeleTED
    DeleTED3yr
    Posted

    This novel is interesting. Definitely better than most trial reads. We have a good world background and story development. I usually write super long reviews where I thoroughly analyze the novel,but I won't do that this time. Give it a try and decide it for yourself. Not everyone will like it. You will feel that the execution of the story is not the best sometimes. I'll definitely read it because this novel can keep me entertained. I expected better when I first saw this novel, but I still like it. It just hurts me that such a good story got blended with Chinese things such as Tang dynasty and other chinese elements. I hoped for a full original story...

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    I Have An Impenetrable Fortress
    Eastern · August Eagle
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  • DeleTED
    DeleTED3yr
    Replied to Mumbajumba

    That one was way better than this.

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    Emperor of Nine Suns
    Eastern · Brown Sword
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  • DeleTED
    DeleTED3yr
    Commented

    but I hope the young heiress part will happen too

    Ch 22 One-Shot 'Future Is Here' [ Skip If You Will/ An Author Note Included ]
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    My CEO Harem Cultivation System
    Urban · RachelRuth
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  • DeleTED
    DeleTED3yr
    Posted

    A new system everyday got dropped and they gave us garbage like this. I really don't get it. That novel had supporters and views too and webnovel still dropped it. I give this novel 2,5 rating based on the first few chapters.

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    Emperor of Nine Suns
    Eastern · Brown Sword
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  • DeleTED
    DeleTED3yr
    Commented

    pandaaaaa

    Ch 11 An Offshoot Of His Day
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    My CEO Harem Cultivation System
    Urban · RachelRuth
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  • DeleTED
    DeleTED3yr
    Commented

    very good novel sadly the release rate is bad.

    Ch 17 We Celebrate The Lunar [II]
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    God Of Immortals
    Eastern · Primate
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  • DeleTED
    DeleTED3yr
    Replied to DeleTED

    the real worth of this novel is no more than 3 stars if I see it objectively

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    Technology Bigshot
    Sci-fi · Rock Panic
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  • DeleTED
    DeleTED3yr
    Posted

    This novel is entertaining an impossible idea. The characters are rather shallow and I feel like the author didn't try too hard explaining certain things. I read it for the sake of fun. The idea is not bad and I like novels like this one, but I can already tell that many people won't like it. I gave it 5 stars only because I needed a novel like this.

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    Technology Bigshot
    Sci-fi · Rock Panic
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  • DeleTED
    DeleTED3yr
    Replied to Yesting

    support the novel if you want it to get picked.

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    A Random System Every Day
    Urban · Cutesy Young Master
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  • DeleTED
    DeleTED3yr
    Commented

    good chapter

    Ch 17 When Your Grandma Sews, Her Fingers Will Be Pricked
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    A Random System Every Day
    Urban · Cutesy Young Master
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  • DeleTED
    DeleTED3yr
    Replied to DeleTED

    WARNING: The story contains strong language.

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    A Random System Every Day
    Urban · Cutesy Young Master
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  • DeleTED
    DeleTED3yr
    Posted

    Here is my honest review! First is the translation quality: It's average, but the word choice is quite good. I enjoy reading it. It's good even if it's average. Stability of Updates: Don't know yet. This novel is still in trial read. We will probably get 14 chapters/week if this novel gets picked. Story development: The story is unique even if it's a system genre. I can't comment on that. I can't call it cliché either. The pacing of the story is good. Not slow and not too rushed. Not too much attention on details and you will have a sense of progression as you read the chapters. There are unexpected moments and you can look forward to what will happen in the future chapters. This is talented level. Character Design: Characters with personality. I like it. We also have character details. I know how the characters look. The author gave me just enough details. Very well balanced. The MC is interesting. He's badass, cool and a good looking scum. His personality is charismatic. You can't find another one like him. World Background: It's a modern world with cultivators and beasts. Yes, it's a very used world, but that's okay. This type of world suits this type of story so I don't have a problem. It's not a detailed world either. World Background is probably the weakest aspect of this novel. As I said, the novel doesn't focus much on details, especially not on world details. My evaluation: A super balanced story with very good characters. The author doesn't dwell much on details, but we get a story with a good flow. The biggest strength of this novel is the MC and the natural flow. A good balance between comedy and seriousness. Let's hope that the quality will stay the same even after the novel gets picked. Most of the readers will like this story. I can guarantee it. Not everyone though. I hope this review helped you understand a few things about this novel. Honestly, I feel like it's one of the best magical realism I've ever read on trial. I'm a fan of these types of novels.

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    A Random System Every Day
    Urban · Cutesy Young Master
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  • DeleTED
    DeleTED3yr
    Replied to NikTitanik866

    seems like you was right. It's 5 extra chaps.

    Ch 25 25 - Entering a Rank E Fortress
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    Lucifer's Descendant System
    Fantasy · Zhanye
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