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This is so horrible. I usually don't waste my time writing bad reviews, but this is just too much. I can't believe that every f*cking Chinese author likes this cliche sh*t. No creativity at all. Why translate this trash? This won't bring any popularity and money at all. A waste of time. Webnovel should say a thank you to original authors. The original section is the only hope. Translated works won't keep this sh*t floating anymore. Please give us quality or just stop it.
This novel is interesting. Definitely better than most trial reads. We have a good world background and story development. I usually write super long reviews where I thoroughly analyze the novel,but I won't do that this time. Give it a try and decide it for yourself. Not everyone will like it. You will feel that the execution of the story is not the best sometimes. I'll definitely read it because this novel can keep me entertained. I expected better when I first saw this novel, but I still like it. It just hurts me that such a good story got blended with Chinese things such as Tang dynasty and other chinese elements. I hoped for a full original story...
This novel is entertaining an impossible idea. The characters are rather shallow and I feel like the author didn't try too hard explaining certain things. I read it for the sake of fun. The idea is not bad and I like novels like this one, but I can already tell that many people won't like it. I gave it 5 stars only because I needed a novel like this.
Here is my honest review! First is the translation quality: It's average, but the word choice is quite good. I enjoy reading it. It's good even if it's average. Stability of Updates: Don't know yet. This novel is still in trial read. We will probably get 14 chapters/week if this novel gets picked. Story development: The story is unique even if it's a system genre. I can't comment on that. I can't call it cliché either. The pacing of the story is good. Not slow and not too rushed. Not too much attention on details and you will have a sense of progression as you read the chapters. There are unexpected moments and you can look forward to what will happen in the future chapters. This is talented level. Character Design: Characters with personality. I like it. We also have character details. I know how the characters look. The author gave me just enough details. Very well balanced. The MC is interesting. He's badass, cool and a good looking scum. His personality is charismatic. You can't find another one like him. World Background: It's a modern world with cultivators and beasts. Yes, it's a very used world, but that's okay. This type of world suits this type of story so I don't have a problem. It's not a detailed world either. World Background is probably the weakest aspect of this novel. As I said, the novel doesn't focus much on details, especially not on world details. My evaluation: A super balanced story with very good characters. The author doesn't dwell much on details, but we get a story with a good flow. The biggest strength of this novel is the MC and the natural flow. A good balance between comedy and seriousness. Let's hope that the quality will stay the same even after the novel gets picked. Most of the readers will like this story. I can guarantee it. Not everyone though. I hope this review helped you understand a few things about this novel. Honestly, I feel like it's one of the best magical realism I've ever read on trial. I'm a fan of these types of novels.