if he dies for while make sure that ei is in tight spot after that I know that you wrote this chapter long ago but I have to ramble

call me petty guy but I am happy that he didn't dance with ei it's hard to understand how can someone be so foolish

I honestly hate how every atg protagonist end up betraying jasmine

I can't bring myself to forgive ei say what you want she is the source of all of the issues

I am really starting to hate ei regardless of the circumstances

please slow agonizing death not quick one

I don't usually review but this one deserves it for me it's the best genshin fic that I have read .....................................................

why won't he just tell her

I don't mind if it takes long but I am really afraid he'd forgive them or give them light punishment

I hate this he really betrayed jasmine

I can't comment on paragraph so I will say it here I like that he let her think she won (even though she didn't) and that something some fanfics and novels really lack that either never lose against friend or get abused by woman and it's fine cause they are cute

That what I was thinking strong Body he was sect master meaning he at least has to be smart and know management and he beggar don't joke with me

I quit for the very same reason plus not finishing anything they started any project or arc that happen leave us blue balled PS. I quit in orario arc

what he said was rude but really are they idiots or what

Thank you author your genshin fic is the one that I liked the most so far keep up the good work

I never liked the milk jokes but The milk is waiting

Taxi money really

He told the sword god to 'Grow strong' And said rudeus is strong I like that

The ten heavenly stem maybe the counterparts of the zodiacs but if two couldn't deal with one non combatants then they aren't comparable with them

If hanzo said in the next chapter thank you for you mercy senior I will lose it