Great fanfic, like the relationship between mc and shiki

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Very good although the grammar is lacking a bit. The main charactar is Op but not so much that it is an instant win he works hard and gets stronger. The story development is also good not too fast and not too slow.

Absolutly amazing story totaly worth 5⭐️. Very good character development and the mc really gives of that Op feeling and was exactly what I was looking for

Thanks

Can the hawk not become a lightning dragon then?