Overall the story was short sweet and to the point. The FL was not weak which I appreciate and both characters compliment each other. I would say job well done.

This was a good storyline and the details and suspense was good. I wish we got to see Emily get married to Shen Yu though. Overall good read.

use pott and pebble to help with the proposal or go back to the park and propose

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