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BruvSamurai10mthCommentedI do think the cooldown is too much of a gamery setting... I mean it doesn't make sense for a cooldown on spells if you still have mana leftover.
(AN: I won't add the others for now and will just show it when Alex uses it.)- BruvSamurai11mthCommented
hello good sir
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These uncapitalized i's are painful to my eyes. I like it.
And then i died, drowning in a nearby river after my car swerved a little too much on the snowy roads. It was not a disappointing death to me, atleast i went out with a little pizazz. - BruvSamurai11mthReplied to OtkauNeko
Well see if these House Elves get the Uncle title
'Wow.... I know this is a French dish, but these Beauxbaton students really seem to like it' Khan thought to himself, as he helped himself to the last bit of Bouillabaisse. 'The House-Elves must have learned some new cultural recipes for our international guests.... I wonder if they would learn some Asian dishes for me....' - BruvSamurai1yrPosted
Just from reading the first 5 chapters, I can say that this fanfic has quite a bit of potential. I've always wanted to read a Vision insert but could never find one that was any good. Hopefully this fanfic gets even better as it goes on. The only question I have is if this book will have any romance, and if so then who, if it isn't a big spoiler.
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- BruvSamurai1yrCommented"Fanny Helsed?!" The tall and strong man exclaimed in surprise when he saw Fanny. He then smirked, "Hey, Helsed, this has nothing to do with you, right? I just want to get along with the young lady behind you."
- BruvSamurai1yrCommented
For some reason this is giving me Opera vibes rn.
"How about this: I'll give you a Qingyun Sword!" - BruvSamurai1yrCommentedThis paragraph has been deleted.
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YOURE COURTING DEATH BY SAYING THAT
"Why is this happening? Why is this happening to? Why? Why? Why? Whywhywhywhywhy?" - BruvSamurai1yrCommentedHaru felt a bit complex when he was reincarnated into the protagonist of "Yosogu no Sora" or one of the most legendary anime in his previous world. Even though it might not be as good as the mainstream popular manga, novel, or game in his previous life, but it was popular among niche people.
- BruvSamurai2yrCommented
Do you not use words like 'the' and 'a' in your novel. It feels weird reading the novel without it. like how it said "Test for Martial Leader" instead of "The test to advance to a Martial Leader" or simply to place a the before it. Also how you put "Survive against Savage beast for 3 mins" instead of "Survive against a Savage beast for 3 mins"
''What?!'' I said with shock on my face - BruvSamurai2yrCommented
it's the talent of forced plot
It had not even been half a month since the opening of the Immortal Destiny imprint, yet that young miss of his had already reached the foundation establishment stage? - BruvSamurai2yrCommentedThis paragraph has been deleted.