back to the past.. take the fruit and become op

I really hate writers who are hungry for money, I mean.. this is just a fanfic, if you want money try to make your original story with your mind

why not take reference from yasaka dxd

congrats you have changed the era.. The era of great pirates will begin with the era of great otaku !!

is it just me or is this chapter short?? give me more 😱😱😱

too much skip time

well.. after the onepiece manga, bleach rob will launch a new manga? maybe naruto?? Dragon Ball?? it would be great to see haki users try ki dragon ball, Or try walking on the sea🤣🤣

Your title and story are very contradictory.. if it's overlord then make a story with the title overlord, if it ends in another dimension please make the title of the story not only talk about overlord The way you tell the story is like you don't have any ideas and it seems like you're pushing yourself

will this story be stopped?

rob : I want to mess up this world with my manga .. but why am I the one who messed up?? Me : then why did you spread your real identity?? if you move in secret Olivia won't mess you up guys Rob : "...."

If Sora didn't get married wouldn't Reiju and Sanji not be born?? Or did Sora and MC get married and then Sanji and Reiju were born with MC's father?🤔🤔

harem please.. I want mc to die,, very cheating he ate 2 devil fruits still not dead, at least he died because of the harem 😂😂

Indonesia masih dijajah kan? Brrti indonesia blm merdeka bahkan blm terbentuk Ko udah ada rupiah?? Selain itu ko namanya indonesia?? Sebelum indonesia nama negri ini bukan indonesia.. Kalo mau sesusai sejarah ya urutin sesuai sejarah Kalo mau full fiksi ya jgn sebut negri2 yg bner2 ada sebut aja negri a b c d e Hal sejarah di campur fiksi ya ga nyambung😂😂😂

(Google translate) Ceritanya menarik, perkembangan cerita juga masuk akal.. saya berharap penulis selalu bersemangat dalam menulis dan mengembangkan cerita menjadi lebih menarik untuk dibaca 😄😄😄

Saya berharap dengan keluarnya manga bertema shinigami orang akan mengembangkan teknik berpedang, karna jika tidak mungkin chunibyou akan terlahir di dunia onepiece 😂

Terima kasih untuk bab, cerita anda sangat menghibur.. saya sangat suka dengan reaksi para kru dan pembawaan cerita anda sangat alami.. Sukses untuk penulis 👍👍👍

Saya sangat menyukai tema seperti ini, bagaimana reaksi marinir dimasa depan? Pemerintah dunia? Kru Roger? Apakah masadepan akan berubah atau tetap terjadi karna plot armor?

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