2 good things. Book good, book interesting. 2 bad things, author only does one chapter a day. Second bad thing, author only does 7 chapters a week. Review complete, now give me my extra chapter before I suffer from withdraw symptoms. New readers, enjoy

I can’t stand it anymore!!! One chapter a day is driving me crazy. I demand you feed my addiction and release at least a measly 20 chapters a day. I’m not asking for much here. Just sit and write all day every day. In exchange I’ll give you my powerstones every day forever. Side note: love the book. P.S. I’m not crazy

Anything works man, just do whatever you like, as long as there is some versatility 😄

Dude I love the book so far, but I don’t know Whats wrong with me. Every time I see that sentence at the end of the chapter “and that’ s a wrap” it makes me mad . Can you put any other sentence there or change it up a bit plz it’s driving me slowly crazy 😂

I don’ know why, but I fell in love with the story instantly. The writing feels so smooth and the transitions between scenes are great. Please update quickly

Pretty good so far. I Like that he created a whole new clan and the powers are great

How interesting. He must be the one who saved Wendy from the car. A twin perhaps

Let genii get toph as a wife as well. Also mai too don’t leave her to Zuni

Good stuff! How many more chapters of raw are there to translate?

This is one of the most interestin fanfics I read about Star Wars. I’m really loving it. it is an absolute masterpiece. I guarantee if your try it you’l enjoy it as long as you like Star Wars and have watched the alien/predator movies. Only complaints I have is the updating time is a little slow. Looks to be about one every week. And the lemon scenes could use more detail, I mean I am a man of culture.

What is this?

Option 1!!

Hate this ending it ruined it. Young harry sucks

Continue!!!!

Great book so far but I don’ know how everyone affords to read these books, it’ like 10 bucks to read 50 chapters

Good

This is not an exaggeration this chapter was masterfully written. I looked down at my arms after reading these new 3 chapters and thought something was crawling on me but it was just my arm hair moving from the goosebumps i got from reading. these last couple chapters stimulated my emotions and my mind could perfectly picture the scene that the sword master was telling arya. Please write more

For real i hate this chapter make him change his mind and not let them in.

Give me the raw link. I don’t care if its in hard to read english, let me have it. stop being stingy author and deleting all the links people post.

Ryu bro can you comment on my post with the raw the author keeps deleting the name wherever it pops up doesnt want us to find it