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  • nmcco99
    nmcco999mth
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    check the 1 though 31 rules

    Ch 104 Rules and Regulations
    After Surviving the Apocalypse, I Built a City in Another World
    Fantasy · NispedanaSan
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  • nmcco99
    nmcco999mth
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    this one is repeated.

    This paragraph has been deleted.
    After Surviving the Apocalypse, I Built a City in Another World
    Fantasy · NispedanaSan
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  • nmcco99
    nmcco999mth
    Commented

    this one is repeated.

    This paragraph has been deleted.
    After Surviving the Apocalypse, I Built a City in Another World
    Fantasy · NispedanaSan
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  • nmcco99
    nmcco999mth
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    no it it not repeated.

    22. During attacks on the territory, anyone who adds chaos will be punishable by at least 2 yellow cards. 
    After Surviving the Apocalypse, I Built a City in Another World
    Fantasy · NispedanaSan
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  • nmcco99
    nmcco999mth
    Commented

    this one is repeated.

    25. During attacks on the territory, everyone who defends the territory will obtain contribution points equivalent in number to the copper coins awarded by the system.
    After Surviving the Apocalypse, I Built a City in Another World
    Fantasy · NispedanaSan
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  • nmcco99
    nmcco999mth
    Commented

    this one is repeated.

    22. During attacks on the territory, anyone who adds chaos will be punishable by at least 2 yellow cards. 
    After Surviving the Apocalypse, I Built a City in Another World
    Fantasy · NispedanaSan
    detail
  • nmcco99
    nmcco999mth
    Commented

    you repeated your myself twice in the rules section.

    Ch 104 Rules and Regulations
    After Surviving the Apocalypse, I Built a City in Another World
    Fantasy · NispedanaSan
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  • nmcco99
    nmcco991yr
    Commented

    you put black beans twice.

    Ch 4 Food Is Key
    I'm Hoarding for the Apocalypse
    General · Struggle
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