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Dumela_Tembo_0282

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2020-09-28 JoinedZambia
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  • Dumela_Tembo_0282
    Dumela_Tembo_02825mth
    Commented

    oh no she didn't!!!!

    "Let go! I am his breedmate!" Ravina called.
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    Touch of Flame
    Fantasy · JasmineJosef
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  • Dumela_Tembo_0282
    Dumela_Tembo_02825mth
    Commented

    excuse me... WHAT?!;;;!!

    His face hardened. "The man who knew that happiness is gone. He died the day his brother died and his wife got burned and his daughter was taken away and God knows what she is enduring right now. And his second daughter…" he paused. "He arrived too late for her and he could not tell her that he was indeed her father."
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    Touch of Flame
    Fantasy · JasmineJosef
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  • Dumela_Tembo_0282
    Dumela_Tembo_02826mth
    Commented

    amazing opening, give me pointers on my book too [img=recommend]

    Ch 1 Prisoner
    altalt
    Touch of Flame
    Fantasy · JasmineJosef
    detail
  • Dumela_Tembo_0282
    Dumela_Tembo_02823yr
    Posted

    I lovee how the story is developing, keep up the good work. The character Khael sure is a mystery on it's own and Elvery has to work on her detective skills.

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    Summertime Mystery
    Horror · mairdn
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