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  • zennin
    zennin6mth
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    So, there doesn't seem to be a very detailed review so far, so I'm going to take this role. :D1- About the background, I don't remember to have seen a story where an entire universe was controlled by a single being. The MC, obviously for the sake of the plot, just so happens to be the only one free from that 'Queen's' influence. 9/10 there. It feels interesting.2- The world background follows your normal cultivation Universe... Until the systems activates! Yes, there is a system. From the looks of it, when it activates, it teleports the MC to other universes with different laws, rules, environments, etc. Simply put, this is a key content that allows the author to bring infinite numbers of environments. 10/10 there.3- Updating stability is what you would expect. Two chapters/day, and the occasional mass release. I wonder if there will be rewards and things like that.4- The development of the story seems to be going at a steady pace, it is not fast, nor is it too slow. Personally, I would like less darkness, but the comedy is very good and lightens the content. 8/105- As for writting quality, I haven't seen any glaring mistakes so far. But then again, with ChatGPT nowadays, authors will only post huge mistakes if they are lazy to use it. 10/10 until now.Well that's more or less it. I like the story, the comedy, and the development, so I'll continue to read and come back later to update it if necessary.

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    Duality of Shadows
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  • zennin
    zennin6mth
    Replied to Suiyan

    IS it true that this book is being written by two authors? It sure seems like your watermark of comedy, very high quality. If there is two to it, then I'm looking forward to the rest.

    altalt
    Duality of Shadows
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  • zennin
    zennin7mth
    Commented

    Quite a big first chapter. So, the MC reincarnated but wasn't controlled by those golden eyes. All lives in the Universe were under its control, and this is only one of the universes those eyes have influence. A word where everyone is possibly a potential enemy. Seems a good concept. Will continue to read and see how it goes.

    Ch 1 The Real Culprit
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    Duality of Shadows
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  • zennin
    zennin7mth
    Commented

    This turned to be quite funny, and now a system... I wonder if the receipt will work. xD

    Ch 3 Beloved New Body
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    Duality of Shadows
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  • zennin
    zennin3yr
    Commented

    exp

    Ch 71 New List
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    Death... and me
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  • zennin
    zennin3yr
    Commented

    oh well...

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    Death... and me
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  • zennin
    zennin3yr
    Commented

    may yes, no?

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    Death... and me
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  • zennin
    zennin3yr
    Commented

    or at least I think

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  • zennin
    zennin3yr
    Commented

    should be going up now

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    Death... and me
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  • zennin
    zennin3yr
    Commented

    harehare

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  • zennin
    zennin3yr
    Commented

    tuvetuvetuve

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  • zennin
    zennin3yr
    Commented

    sasasasasa

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  • zennin
    zennin3yr
    Commented

    more exp too haha

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  • zennin
    zennin3yr
    Commented

    exp exp esxp

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  • zennin
    zennin3yr
    Commented

    I will think for sure

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  • zennin
    zennin3yr
    Commented

    thanks

    Ch 147 What Was That Shit?
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    Death... and me
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  • zennin
    zennin3yr
    Replied to Clayyer

    exp

    Ch 147 What Was That Shit?
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  • zennin
    zennin3yr
    Commented

    Yes Thanks man

    Ch 147 What Was That Shit?
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    Death... and me
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  • zennin
    zennin3yr
    Replied to Suiyan

    top 30 when i arrived kkkkk

    Ch 147 What Was That Shit?
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    Death... and me
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  • zennin
    zennin3yr
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter

    Ch 11 Moving Out
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    Death... and me
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