Austin_MacAleese
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everything past this chapter is giving me errors cannot find page what's going on its been like 3 days
novels great and doing well however Op might wanna change the names of defensive structures in chapter 384 and onwards as it's blatantly copying clash and I wouldn't want u getting into trouble over it(plagiarism)( alternatively could use ranged attack towers, mounted ballista implacements , mage/arcane towers?) besides this Op I love the novel and am waiting in anticipation to finally read how MC resolves his love life problems and watching how my favorite awkward ships stumbles alongđ
it mentions that ketis has already given birth but both her and Gloriana were implanted at the same time with designer babies, the way its described during production is that Gloriana isn't anywhere near due or at least it isn't mentioned I'm curious if this was missed due to all the time jumping going on in story at the moment
honestly you have talent for building your story world and painting a picture for readers and this comment isn't to put you down but you really need to get a better translator to work with the meaning of your sentences and a lot of the words you use while audibly correct are in fact incorrect when put into context with how they are used and the meaning of your words has been jumbled to the point where the reader has to reconstruct the entire sentence to try and make sense of it....if you can fix this then I would highly expect you to see more readers