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  • Goren
    Goren3mth
    Commented

    Why is the heroine switching gender constantly?

    Ch 4 Chapter 4
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    Before I Died I Forcibly Kissed The Heroine (CP)
    Anime & Comics · Satella_Lust
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  • Goren
    Goren3mth
    Commented

    Consept of the story is interesting, but I think you should have written down who of the named characters is talking and thinking, and what their faces were like during those moments.For example, "'Insert character name' was frowning in anger and disgust before being their eyes went wide and their eyebrows shot up in surprise." Simple things like this I think would improve the story a bit more and make the story more readable.If the author reads this comment, then thank you taking the time to read this and I hope I gave good advice.

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  • Goren
    Goren4mth
    Commented

    Narcissa's two brothers???

    Ever since returning to Hogwarts, Narcisa couldn't get her mind off the scenes of her two brothers having their study sessions at the Black mansion.
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    Harry Potter: Mind Control
    Book&Literature · Monk_of_Souls
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  • Goren
    Goren5mth
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    Eyes of the Jungle

    Ch 9 The Eye of the Jungle and the Wind of the Oak Tree
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    A Necromancer Who Just Wants to Plant Trees
    Games · The Key In 10 Years
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  • Goren
    Goren5mth
    Commented

    So, the MC gets the 'Eyes of the Forest' skill, but a couple paragraphs after it's now ' Eyes other Jungle'. ?? WHAT ??

    Ch 9 The Eye of the Jungle and the Wind of the Oak Tree
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    A Necromancer Who Just Wants to Plant Trees
    Games · The Key In 10 Years
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  • Goren
    Goren5mth
    Commented

    Wouldn't it be more appropriate to say that the 'APP' would notify him, not the 'SYSTEM'?

    Ch 3 Chapter 3 "A Long Night For Her"
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    My Heroine Accomplice System (18+)
    Anime & Comics · Avalynez
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  • Goren
    Goren5mth
    Commented

    Where did Nick get the "A History of Magic" book? Cause he hasn't gone to Diagon Ally or made a purchase of it through the system's shop.

    Ch 18 Close call
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    Harry potter: The ringmaker
    Book&Literature · loskro
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  • Goren
    Goren5mth
    Commented

    Hi, I just started reading this so I'm a bit late to this, but you could have Sakura start to train a bit more seriously after all available skills. That way she, like Naruto, will get a better body earlier.

    Ch 6 Plan for Ino (R18)
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    Naruto: Skill Copying System
    Anime & Comics · AzureRaven69
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  • Goren
    Goren5mth
    Commented

    I would suggest taking the "Part 1, Part 2" bits off for when you upload the chapters.

    Ch 1 New World
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    Black Clover: Reborn As a Silva
    Anime & Comics · Eternum0616
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  • Goren
    Goren6mth
    Commented

    A third rule 47.

    Ch 20 Chapter 20
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    DxD: History's Strongest Phoenix
    Anime & Comics · Concerne
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  • Goren
    Goren6mth
    Commented

    There are two rule 47's, one in chapter 11 and the one in this one.

    Ch 14 Chapter 14
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    DxD: History's Strongest Phoenix
    Anime & Comics · Concerne
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  • Goren
    Goren6mth
    Commented

    true, stabbed is still stabbed. Extremely painful.

    Ch 19 Chapter 19
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    DxD: History's Strongest Phoenix
    Anime & Comics · Concerne
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  • Goren
    Goren6mth
    Commented

    Where's Kyoka Jiro on the list?

    Ch -1 Gender Bend Help List + Harem
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    My Hero Academia Reborn: World 63
    Anime & Comics · RedWarren
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  • Goren
    Goren9mth
    Commented

    It's Isaiah and Veldora that saved Valarie, not Isaiah and Kurama.

    Ch 50 Aftermath
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    DxD: ReKiba
    Anime & Comics · Alcoholic_Panda
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  • Goren
    Goren9mth
    Commented

    Why is Kurenai with the third hokage?

    Ch 29 Good Things Should be Promoted!
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    Konoha's Life Mentor, Kyoichi
    Anime & Comics · Rookni
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  • Goren
    Goren10mth
    Commented

    please stop calling male characters 'she/her' and female characters 'he/his'.

    Ch 9 Koneko's storyline and the protagonist wich catching the affair
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    The Heroine Eavesdropped on My Voice Heart
    Anime & Comics · DogLickerGods
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  • Goren
    Goren2yr
    Commented

    I thought the rook was worth five pawn pieces.

    Ch 3 Scotsman and Leviathan 2
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    High School DxD: Scotland Forever (Self Insert)
    Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0
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  • Goren
    Goren2yr
    Commented

    Konrad or Starfall? I'm getting really confused.

    Ch 9 Ponyville - part 1.
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    Different Royal Pony.
    TV · Blacklares
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  • Goren
    Goren2yr
    Commented

    I thought Golbat was a girl?

    Ch 14 Chapter fourteen- Shell Shocked
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    Pokemon Storm
    Anime & Comics · PsyChotiX556
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