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the novel is well written, in the grammar aspect, but has a lot of shit chat. Entire chapters of useless dialogues and stupid advices. And after the inicial chapters, the pace of the novel drop really bad. I do like a more realistic MC, but this issues really take me down. I don't know if I will give another chance.
I don't get it, why he has a ability in fifth dimension, but is considered a third dimension human. What is necessary to ascend?
I would liked more if the MC was not a side character, it's obvious that Nephis is the true MC, she has a better background story, better development, and much more charisma. But we have to follow Sunny that does anything relevant for dozens chapters and keep been dumb and week even though he has a divine grade aspect. I would like much more accompany Nephis than Sunny.
This don't make any sense. I hope the writer makes a chapter explaining better his endless rankings.
Great! Spoiler in the title...
What's the cultivation realms?
Google Translator issues 🤦
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