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WriterSim13

WriterSim13

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Aspiring writer and game developer. Just trying to do what I love while hoping others enjoy it too.

2020-09-14 JoinedPhilippines
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  • WriterSim13
    WriterSim132yr
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    I will now be uploading 14 chapters a week, that means 1+ chapters a day. Updates will usually be 2 chapters a day, but if I only upload 1 that means one of the other days will get an extra chapter. Written: 30/06/2021 Hiatus is over you guys! Get ready for more action-packed shenanigans and misadventures! Written: 01/06/2021 Extremely sorry but this will be on hiatus for a couple of days while I sort out some irl issues. I'll upload the same amount of chapters as the days I missed once I get back though! Written: 24/05/2021

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    Infinite Resurgence
    Fantasy · WriterSim13
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  • WriterSim13
    WriterSim132yr
    Posted

    The story has a unique narrative style, and although chapters are much shorter than most other stories, and some are just A/N fillers, the story is still quite interesting.

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    Survival Journey
    Urban · foxyash
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  • WriterSim13
    WriterSim132yr
    Posted

    The story is interesting and progresses nicely, but is hindered in quality by the large amount of grammatical errors. If these are taken care of, this story has a lot of potential to grow and become much better.

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    Gender Genesis: Chance in a different gender.
    Fantasy · Oemar_danoes
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  • WriterSim13
    WriterSim132yr
    Replied to Ice_Witch

    Lol maybe she IS the ghoul

    With a cold and icy voice that sent shivers down his spine, Rebecca leaned close to James and whispered into his ear, "You're not getting away that easily Jameson. This might have been caused by some sort of terrorist attack, but I'll still be holding your scrawny ass accountable for all this."
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    Infinite Resurgence
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    WriterSim132yr
    Replied to Ice_Witch
    Sadly, James had to agree. It was one thing that the tavern was destroyed by a magus bomb, it was another that it had been caused by a ghoul. Ghouls are known as notoriously selfish creatures, doing only what they see as the best for them. Blowing yourself up in a room full of people instead of sucking their souls out was quite the deviation from a ghoul's usual behavior.
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    Infinite Resurgence
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  • WriterSim13
    WriterSim132yr
    Replied to YeshuaH

    Thanks for your support!

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    Infinite Resurgence
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  • WriterSim13
    WriterSim132yr
    Posted

    Plot is interesting, but the use of present tense narration feels off to me, and the large amounts of dialogue with not enough description in between makes visualizing the story hard. With a little work, this story can easily become much better. Keep up the good work.

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    Rebirth of the golden lineage
    Fantasy · YeshuaH
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  • WriterSim13
    WriterSim132yr
    Posted

    An interesting plot furthered by good writing. Although system fantasy stories have become an increasingly common staple, hopefully the author will be able to distance this story from others.

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    Alone: Tale of a monster hunter
    Fantasy · AkshatArpit
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  • WriterSim13
    WriterSim132yr
    Replied to Xeeraaruwa

    Thanks! I'll keep doing my best to show the readers my story instead of just telling them about it with my writing!

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    Infinite Resurgence
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  • WriterSim13
    WriterSim132yr
    Replied to lon_okami

    Thanks!

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    Infinite Resurgence
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  • WriterSim13
    WriterSim132yr
    Posted

    A few grammatical errors here and there, and a shaky update schedule, but still a good read for werewolf romance story lovers and the like.

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    The Fate Of The Female Alpha
    Teen · Xeeraaruwa
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  • WriterSim13
    WriterSim132yr
    Replied to Daoist_Little_Yun

    Aw, thanks! 'Totally' not worrying about the plot hehehe.

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    Infinite Resurgence
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  • WriterSim13
    WriterSim132yr
    Posted

    An intriguing plot, the well-done writing makes up for some of the cliches and plot convenience in the story. An interesting read for those who enjoy this particular niche.

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    Combat Maid Harem
    Fantasy · Daoist_Little_Yun
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  • WriterSim13
    WriterSim132yr
    Replied to mrant12

    Thanks, and I appreciate your enthusiasm!

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    Infinite Resurgence
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  • WriterSim13
    WriterSim132yr
    Posted

    A very intriguing plot that is well paced and written. The unique idea combined with the superb writing makes for a smash hit of a story. My only nitpick would be that Alexander sometimes uses phrases that shouldn't have been around at his time, or acts different from how most would in his era.

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    Alexander the Great Mage
    Fantasy · mrant12
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  • WriterSim13
    WriterSim132yr
    Replied to Da_Bylosis

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    Ch 2 II - Meet the Madame
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    Infinite Resurgence
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  • WriterSim13
    WriterSim132yr
    Replied to Da_Bylosis

    Hehe, thanks for the updated review!

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    Infinite Resurgence
    Fantasy · WriterSim13
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  • WriterSim13
    WriterSim132yr
    Replied to J_Davids

    Thanks!

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    Infinite Resurgence
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  • WriterSim13
    WriterSim132yr
    Posted

    Story is written very well, only issue being a few grammatical and spelling errors. This seems like the type of story I usually watch as a k drama if I'm being honest, and definitely has a lot of potential.

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    A Fair Bargain
    Others · J_Davids
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  • WriterSim13
    WriterSim132yr
    Posted

    The story is written pretty well, save for the grammatical errors here and there. Also kind of irked me that the question in the title got answered in the first few paragraphs of the first chapter. Other than that, it's a pretty straightforward fantasy transmigration story with a nicely written plot.

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    Deleted Work
    Fantasy · lon_okami
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