So far, the best book ive read on WebNovel. kudos!

Chapter 48

Incredible story line. very intrigued by the characters. I would love to get my hands in there and edit out a few inaccuracies ! Lol

Still love the story line. But, You said in the beginning of the chapter that Nik is 5’2” ??? Then you switched to 180some centimeters . Americans cant handle the metric system. stick with inches and feet. Maybe edit Nic to SIX foot 2! Lol

Enjoying the story line. a few errors . They didn’t have bathrooms back then. they had “privy’s”

I really enjoy the story line. but there are a lot of grammatical errors .

So far so good. i like the story line. could use some editing for grammar and spelling but i can read past that. Dislocate your shoulder and pat yourself on the back!