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Milak_Peter

Milak_Peter

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2020-09-11 JoinedGlobal
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  • Milak_Peter
    Milak_Peter1yr
    Replied to thegodoftheneworld

    the ones in the malls I guess

    Things like salaries, ingredients costs, rental fees, personalized products, and so on.
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    I am the Entertainment Tycoon
    Urban · StarryForestJaguar
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  • Milak_Peter
    Milak_Peter1yr
    Replied to The_Puffer

    True, my mistake 😅

    She seems to have an ability called 'shadows'; basically she becomes one with a shadow and can walk in the shadows... This is a very broken skill, she can pretty much kill anyone at night.
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    My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.
    Fantasy · Victor_Weismann
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  • Milak_Peter
    Milak_Peter2yr
    Replied to Apocalypse_2ndLife

    The kill count does not multiply. "Only" the loot and the rewards (resources, skills and special rewards, like blessings)

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    Tribe: I Become Invincible With My 10,000x Bonus From The Start
    Fantasy · Strange Human
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  • Milak_Peter
    Milak_Peter2yr
    Replied to HollowGod

    Thats not even the point. Those numbers does nothing, just there to show you some nonsense amount, so there will be a justification when mc spend trillions of resources. Dont hang up on the wrong thing :D

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    Tribe: I Become Invincible With My 10,000x Bonus From The Start
    Fantasy · Strange Human
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  • Milak_Peter
    Milak_Peter2yr
    Posted

    The idea itself is not bad, although we have seen similar things before. My main problem is that the characters are just dumb, no depth to be seem at all and most of all the mc is an idiot. I can not connect with him in any level, the decision he made are nonsense. Although author tries to justifie it with low EQ, but the reason why he has low EQ... no one knows... there is no reason for it and there is no background story to justify. At the same time author has made a mistake interpreting how a person with low EQ would act in different situations. Summary: he is not interesting at all and he is an idiot, based on his choices. Moreover we never get the reason why he is capable commanding different people with different skillset within minutes. There is no propeller storytelling... And thats a big no-no for me. To be honest I lost interest about chapter 50, but I gave it a chance and read it up to ch 100, but it just gave me a headache. Dropped.

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    Let Me Game in Peace
    Urban · Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
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  • Milak_Peter
    Milak_Peter2yr
    Commented

    Should I tell him that at night there are no shadows only darkness? You know that shadows need a lightsource and an object, right? [img=recommend]

    She seems to have an ability called 'shadows'; basically she becomes one with a shadow and can walk in the shadows... This is a very broken skill, she can pretty much kill anyone at night.
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    My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.
    Fantasy · Victor_Weismann
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  • Milak_Peter
    Milak_Peter2yr
    Posted

    To be honest, I found this novel pretty good at the beginning, but it went downhill very fast. I still perseviered until chapter 180+, but then I gave up. One point is indeed the massive nationlism, which would not be too bad as most chinese novels have a good amount. The main issue is that in this novel its unbearable for me. (note that I am not from the US) The other thing is the MC whose character is all over the place, like there is not one, but at least 10 different people. His thinking is massively different then the background story show us. He is someone who spent most of his live (or thats how it seems) in hospital bad and then dies. He missed many things in life. He also said he wants to enjoy his new life the fülledt, he do not want to die. That could generate a cowardly MC, with possible character development as time goes on. But that is not the case. The MC is doing nothing, that could count as enjoying life. No traveling, getting friends, partying, or (god forbid) getting a woman. He does nothing at all, except reading, eating and sleeping. That what the hospital should have looked like no? Time to time the author tries to throw us some bones like, "I am handsome, I have time to have a girfriend", but not actively looking for a woman and avoiding woman as a plague is 2 very different things. Also he is inconsistent in his decisions without any narrative why did he make those. The characters are all over the place, not well thought out and empty most of the time. The writing itself is far from bad and there is a semi-decent world building as well, but most of the time I think the author is at most 10-12 years old with no life experience at all. And my biggest problem is that I absolutely can not relate to the MC in any way. Not with his thinking, decisions and most of the time not even his plans, other then wanting to become stronger. At the end he is an idiotic child with a massive strenght. The worst kind.

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    Zero To Hero In The Martial Arts Library
    Eastern · Wood Easily Starts Fires
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  • Milak_Peter
    Milak_Peter2yr
    Commented

    Just after she said that she stole the fruits, she suddenly does not know what that means? [img=recommend]

    "Stole? What do you mean?"
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    Zero To Hero In The Martial Arts Library
    Eastern · Wood Easily Starts Fires
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