I believe it was said that their race doesnt change, it was around the time they used their evolution magic to help them become super devils. It was said that reincarnated devils, keep their race but only get the perks like more magic, longer livespans, stronger bodies, wings etc.

Just drop it. You essentially stole the entire story, changed a few things and thats it. If you already don't know what to do and have no plan there is no point in continuing it.. it will just dissapoint everyone following the story due to randomness and plotholes or you just dropping it out of the blue. Should you decide to revamp the story, start with a rough storyplan. Start/End of story. Major plots e.g. - Blue wind tournament, seven nations tournament, Illusionary Continent, God Convention, Devil Emporer Return etc. - who's a part, who isn't, how your charakter fits and what you want to happen. Your main charakter, background, apperance, personality traits, main weapon, fighting style etc. After you have that start a story. No point starting a story without a plan. It will just become another dropped story if you don't even know how to start, develop and end your story. You already beeing stuped for how to continue while essentially stealing the whole story says enough.

Also try to get one short story of Obito with his kamui of the blue pole star where he places books in the liberays of king realms and then use his sharingan on middle star realms and high star realms of sightings and fights of extreamly strong cultivators who called themselves otsutsuki so the ball gets rolling. The books in those liberays should include information to make them a threat and juicy for what you plan. Whats in there you decide how you want to make the story move afterall your main charakter essentially is an otsutsuki

To me it's fine how it went till now. I think the best way to go about it is let the girls accept him as Shuji Otsutsuki and not mention the name Itachi or his past. And should u try to incorporate the Naruto story do it from Narutos point of view where Itachi is basically irrelevant. Also illusions of Konoha and hidden villages make no sense, they don't fly anything at sky profound realm would just laugh if u try portraying them as strong. And if possible don't use Edo Tensei but make Madara if you use him a real living person with his partioned mind.

So there where never more then those 35 chapters ?

According to the description of the one you posted there is a version of it in a different language can u tell me the name of it, or send the link? Tried to find it but didnt get it.

Exactly that. Aside from over time realising and visiting to talk they have no fault for the initial leaving him alone.

I'd chose number 2. and im neither gay nor naive, at least when its related to the given story. They both were children below the age of 10 obviously they don't understand what their parents did at that time so they didn't really do any harm. The not adding them to the harem part even though they clearly have affection should be attributed to the fact that they grew up and over time should understand what they involuntary did with their parents and still decided not to visit. And while we are at that. I really dislike the fact that Rias gets portrayed as a saint by standing up to his mother telling her that they left him alone when before she couldn't care to even send 1 servant to his house to care for him while his family wasn't there. I know it wasn't nessecarry but they clearly didn't know. Giving her a chance to join his harem would be naive since before she saw his apparence and strength she didn't care about him at all.

Well since you asked for thoughts. Don't pair up annyone from the ORC aside from maybe that one girl he meet in the past with Issei. If possible let him remove the evil piece and let her reunite with her family. For how you can chalk it up to the sharingan beeing able to see it and sever the connection with her body.

If I remember correctly his parents said High Humans and Spirits could do that. So its highly likely that she can to. Afterall she is supposed to be a half spirit.

Im really getting tired over this level comparison. Level has absolutly nothing to do with knowledge. All having a higher level means is having higher stats.

For magic or more accurately development abilites at level 2 it should be Spirit Healing. That grants him quicker magic power recharging so he can use more cards over time. Especially with Lokis current ideas where he would be spending a lot of time on them. And both Ais and him should get the Swordmanship development abilities during their next Status Updates due to them using mainly swords. Especially with Aiden getting sword related techniques every level up. ( I know it actually doesnt work like that, but you can chalk that up to Aidens increased comprehension due to his bloodline and do the same to Ais since she is a half spirit and her father beeing a sword user aswell. ) I also read a lot people saying that he needs something like telekinesis. In my opinion absolout control over his cards should already be present. His mother used millions at the same time, so you shouldn't even bother on explaining how they move and we just accept that these cards have a will of their own or just move as intended everytime he isnt using more than few at the same time. Otherwise you would be spending three chapters just to explain what his thought process was and how he had some insane ability that lets his mine experience 15 hours within 0.1 second to do what needs to be done.

I support this.

To everyone that is looking at the reviews to decide wheter to read or not. This story is 3 years old already and never got further than the 6th chapter. Therefore unless you see a 7th chapter I recommend not reading it at all, since the story is really good in my opinion but its agonizing knowing that there isn't a continuation and there most likely will not be one if noone picks it up and decides to keep it going.

The story is 3 years old already, and it never got further than the 6th volume. Don't get your hopes up.

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Don't, keep it your ways. It's your story not others, if they don't like it they just shouldn't read it.

Harems are bad because most Authors write them terrible. Personally I'd love to see your MC with 2 woman. While the first should be Mayumi, it would also give you an interessting element between Maya und Kouchi. Later on you could include Lina. Since you are already planning for the MC to help Tatsuya, Miyuki should stay with him as he can help them later on as the next Clan Head. While with Lina you can make Mayumi accepting of her during the Vampire incident and have her leave Stars after that and join the Yotsuba family as a 2nd fiancee to your MC. Mayumi will leave the school after the 1. year anyways so its harder to incorparate her into the story while with Lina she is around since she is the same age as MC. But thats my take, all I really wish for you is to take your time and keep the story going and not randomly stop like most do.

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What you on about? What you know is speculation. As of right now (Chapter 1786) which is the latest released chapter there is absolut no new information regarding the blue pole star or any inhabitants.