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is there going to be a next world(s)???? this is to good for a single world. if nothing else cut his power and make him invincle in the dojo or keep the power but do as you have a make him barely do anything and keep training new students. could also take his students with him from one piece world after getting the army and marine to be the new "big" powers. could change the title to something like "GOLDEN LIST OF ALL WORLDS" or something along those lines
you need to do more research, golden core isn't powerful at all. this like first couple of chapters I'd full of you pushing to us that "ohhh ancient sect./ golden core powerhouse" no. golden core middle of the beginning levels its like a small boss that shouldn't fill a couple of pages worth just to push on to the readers "he's strong" lol. but good try.