Goodddddddd the story is great because the expressions and emotions are so descriptive. The writing makes me feel like the characters are coming to life. I would suggest describing the surrounding a bit more like the atmosphere but overall it was a great book I can’t wait to read more keep up the good work. 👏👏

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 Good story it’s crime really. It doesn’t have enough views

It’s soooooo goodd I love the chapter The story seems very original and interesting. I think this story could be more descriptive tho... but overall it is really fun to read