It's amazing! can't wait for more updates >w<
Try to just change the typo's and spelling mistakes, other than that its amazing! His own idol killed him? Thats an amazing idea! This book deserves a lot more reads. Keep up the amazing work!
"My name is Choi Beomgyu" the cute child responded, still staring with a dead face at Jaehyun, who was really starting to get scared by the boy's actions.
"Anyways, Jungkook, go please calm your dad, if this keeps up, we're going to have to somehow explain how two teachers suddenly disappeared from this world" Jungkook's mother gruesomely said, causing the bystanders to shiver up.
"Earth to Jaehyun, why are you just staring at your big brother like that, this is not the time to be playing around, we have school in just 30 mins and if you don't get out of bed now...I'm going to make you!" the bunny said with a creepy smile while also taking a fighting stance, scaring Jaehyun out of his wits. It seems that this bunny has prowess in martial arts...wait...a bunny with martial arts...
"Now it's up to me!" Ran says as though the world relies on her shoulders. (remember the legend where one god had to carry the earth on his shoulders, I think it's Zeus, who is it actually? I'd like a comment here ;) )