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Hell_in_Heaven

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  • Hell_in_Heaven
    Hell_in_Heaven3yr
    Commented

    Nice story... Keep up!

    Ch 5 My own battle
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    Innocence – Scarred for life
    Teen · RaufaRashyd
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  • Hell_in_Heaven
    Hell_in_Heaven3yr
    Posted

    I am getting Korean vibes out of it... or it's just only me. Oh well, let's get on the review. After reading a couple of chapters, I can say that it's 'worth your time'. The story development is nice from my perspective. But I do have an issue with the 'tags'. I AM UNABLE TO UNDERSTAND THEM. Keep it up by the way.👏👏

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    I Think I'm Crazy
    Celebrities · JazmineAckerman
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  • Hell_in_Heaven
    Hell_in_Heaven3yr
    Posted

    The Writing quality and the pace patched up with the character development, it's nice. I liked it. Keep it up, author. Looking forward to it.✌👏

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    Her Minds Instinct
    Urban · Serial_seresposa
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  • Hell_in_Heaven
    Hell_in_Heaven3yr
    Posted

    I know it might sound silly. But... When I read it, it was 'Absurdly Amazing'. The Writing quality and the pace patched up with the character development, it's just unfathomable. Keep it up, author.✌👏

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    Bounded by Blood
    Fantasy · marichat_nettenoir
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  • Hell_in_Heaven
    Hell_in_Heaven3yr
    Posted

    To be really really honest here... I am quite oblivious to Yuri. But reading the chapters, I think that you definitely should have an interest in girly love. Howbeit, it was a nice reading. Keep up, author...👏👏

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    Love You Through Worlds Apart
    Fantasy · Soul_Ruler
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  • Hell_in_Heaven
    Hell_in_Heaven3yr
    Posted

    The plot setting and character development are good. A story about a woman taking the initiative to be something on her own is interesting. But do prioritize the editing over the releases to enhance the content quality. Minor grammatical errors do seem like nothing much but can be annoying in stories especially relating to 'character development'. One would love to bookmark it after a couple of tune-ups. Overall, the pacing and writing are good. Keep it up.👏👏

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    The Shadow of The Past
    Urban · Herlove
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  • Hell_in_Heaven
    Hell_in_Heaven3yr
    Replied to RaufaRashyd

    Thank you for your kind words. ✌

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    Dominion of Chaos (Hiatus)
    Action · Hell_in_Heaven
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  • Hell_in_Heaven
    Hell_in_Heaven3yr
    Replied to YanBae

    Thank you for your kind words.✌

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    Dominion of Chaos (Hiatus)
    Action · Hell_in_Heaven
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  • Hell_in_Heaven
    Hell_in_Heaven3yr
    Replied to Amy_Reason

    Thanks a lot for reading...

    The acquaintance spoke as he proudly stroked his chest in front of the middle-aged man. He was well-known around this area as the famous pub's master. Not everyone knew of his real identity as an information broker who worked for a particular organization that was secretly affiliated to the Royal Family.
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    Dominion of Chaos (Hiatus)
    Action · Hell_in_Heaven
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  • Hell_in_Heaven
    Hell_in_Heaven3yr
    Commented

    The MC sure has a personality... Anyways, keep it up 👌

    Ch 2 I want to retire!
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    Rise of the Invincible Ghost Queen!
    Fantasy · ShiXiaoLing
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  • Hell_in_Heaven
    Hell_in_Heaven3yr
    Commented

    He finally calmed down...

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    Rise of the Invincible Ghost Queen!
    Fantasy · ShiXiaoLing
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  • Hell_in_Heaven
    Hell_in_Heaven3yr
    Commented

    Keep it up 👏

    Ch 1 I died-ish!
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    Rise of the Invincible Ghost Queen!
    Fantasy · ShiXiaoLing
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  • Hell_in_Heaven
    Hell_in_Heaven3yr
    Commented

    He sure likes to die... XD!

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    Rise of the Invincible Ghost Queen!
    Fantasy · ShiXiaoLing
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  • Hell_in_Heaven
    Hell_in_Heaven3yr
    Posted

    Honestly, this is the first time reviewing the novel with this many POVs. It has its flaws as writing the first time isn't always perfect. But the story can't be judged as of yet. The POVs have some really fast transition but it isn't boring. You can call it a new way to read a story with unique story development. Having not many chapters, it is still hard to judge the work. Nevertheless, keep it up 👌

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    TO THE MEAN MATE
    Fantasy · Amy_Reason
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  • Hell_in_Heaven
    Hell_in_Heaven3yr
    Posted

    The story definitely has the feel to attract readers. Considering that this is a new story, the development gives the urge to read more. About the content quality and character design: There's a proper use of one's emotions, the MC, and the secondary characters are not just some 2D dimwits. Having a story of their own, the characters' design seems quite nice to me. And having good content quality is a plus. The updates are a bit slow but I do recommend others to give it a try.

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    Orchestrate to Fytó
    Fantasy · YanBae
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  • Hell_in_Heaven
    Hell_in_Heaven3yr
    Commented

    Nice development till now... Keep it up!

    Ch 2 Chapter 2
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    MATE
    Fantasy · Midnyt_Zun
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  • Hell_in_Heaven
    Hell_in_Heaven3yr
    Commented

    A kiss out of nowhere, well that's interesting...

    Ch 1 Chapter 1
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    MATE
    Fantasy · Midnyt_Zun
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  • Hell_in_Heaven
    Hell_in_Heaven3yr
    Posted

    The story definitely has the feel to attract readers. Considering that this is a new story, the development gives the urge to read more. About the content quality and character design: There's a proper use of one's emotions and feelings, MC, and the secondary characters are not just some 2D dimwits. Having a story of their own, the characters' design seems quite nice to me. And having good content quality is a plus. Suspense filled with love, hate, and despair... I do recommend others to give it a try.

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    Innocence – Scarred for life
    Teen · RaufaRashyd
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