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Training_Dummy3yrReplied to Clarence_Dungannot arrogance. If the translator isn't fluent in the language he/she is translating into, they should leave it to someone who is .
The four were filled with aghast. This group was even bigger than last time. They must be more than ten thousand. Among them many had wings like iron, which indicated they were mutant.- Training_Dummy3yrReplied to Shadowccaster_Mark
author trying to be slick using a word nobody knows. She .he needs to be paying more attention to the overabundance of grammatical errors and typos.
In the outskirts of the Elfaven Kingdom near the border of the cliff, an aerial view would allow one to see the multiple gigantic godowns that were situated there which stored the reserves of the Kingdom. - Training_Dummy3yrCommented
How the **** does laying bed for an hour cause excruciating pain or cause blood to stop pumping? Idiot
Seeing the King open his eyes, Kellor hurried over and helped him up from the bed he was laying on. Due to being in the same position for a long period of time, he had already lost sensation in most parts of his body. Yet, even though the pain of having the blood rush back into his legs and arms was excruciating, the smile on Daneel's face did not leave. To Olfax, it looked like the expression of someone who had accomplished something. This confused him, as if everything had gone well the King would not have opened his eyes so soon. - Training_Dummy3yrReplied to FlammenwurferCh 159 IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT
- Training_Dummy3yrCommentedCh 155 Happiness(2)
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occupants* Inhabitants implies that they live inside the throne room.
A fire had lit up in the eyes of the inhabitants of the throne room when they heard this news. The Eldest Prince was the demon who could be designated as the main root for many of the incidents which led to tens of thousands of people having their lives destroyed. - Training_Dummy3yrCommented
It was easy, nobody else's oaths have meant anything, why should his? The oath system just seems to be for show. Filler the author can use at his discretion for some future nonsensical plot element that adds unnecessary complication to the story. It is already turning in to one of those stories where entire pages can be completely skipped without missing anything important. Just gotta look for quotation marks.
How did his master overcome the limitation of the oath to do everything he had done? - Training_Dummy3yrCommented
swayed*
His vision blurring, he swung from side to side before finally collapsing to the groud with the cylinder still in his hand. - Training_Dummy3yrReplied to bbqweebCh 117 Altercation
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Pffft, we all know what happens when he Resolves to do things. He does the exact opposite. He's gonna have to build an ark because he's going to flood the entire world with his tears.
Still, he resolved to have better grasp on his emotions from then on. Ordering the kitchens to send expensive wine and delicious food, the King spent his first night in the palace partying in the throne room with his friends, family and followers. - Training_Dummy3yrReplied to DjabilongCh 96 Satisfaction Level
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