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  • dunkinboi
    dunkinboi2yr
    Replied to vurse

    Its better than not updating at all dood đŸ˜©

    Ch 2 Chapter 2
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    Sea Of Cooking
    Anime & Comics · vurse
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  • dunkinboi
    dunkinboi2yr
    Commented

    Ugh right I gotta wait for another chap *sigh*. Just something I've noticed in this chap, there was a lot of "gentle" words. If you can, you can use a synonym of that words so it doesn't feel redundant. Keep it up! ^ ^

    Ch 2 Chapter 2
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    Sea Of Cooking
    Anime & Comics · vurse
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  • dunkinboi
    dunkinboi2yr
    Posted

    Looking forward to this fic! Your quick in updating and the flow of the story is great. Keep it up! :D woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!

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    The Draconic Hero: Eragon
    Anime & Comics · Retired_Sleepy
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  • dunkinboi
    dunkinboi2yr
    Commented

    Spare update plssssss

    Ch 8 Ch.8 [ Uzushiogakure ]
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    Abandoned In Naruto ( HIATUS )
    Anime & Comics · Imain_69
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  • dunkinboi
    dunkinboi2yr
    Posted

    The idea of the story is quite intruiging and I'm looking forward for the next updates. Butttt the grammar and writing style can be a bit better. Well if you continue this story, your skills in writing will genuinely improve so keep at it! 😉

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    Abandoned In Naruto ( HIATUS )
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  • dunkinboi
    dunkinboi2yr
    Commented

    I have been opening this bloody app everyday just to see if you updated đŸ„Č. Is it too obvious that I'm bad with cliffhangers?? Lawd at least if you update for a while then pls make the chapter longer so its worth it pls 💀💀😭

    Ch 17 Three fools.
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    I'm a man, so how did I end up as Sakura Haruno ?.
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  • dunkinboi
    dunkinboi3yr
    Commented

    ita a great story man but sometimes their age just really threw me off 😂

    "Konoha and the Uzumaki have been allies for a long time. The Uzumaki were known for their unquestionable superiority in Fuinjutsu and provided Konoha with a lot of powerful seals to support them during war times. That is also why they were wiped out by the coalition of three hostile countries. They feared the Uzumaki, because of their seals. That being said, remove that headband and show me your cursed seal. I will get rid of it."
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    Goddess of Ice; Reborn as Naruto's twin sister [Completed]
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  • dunkinboi
    dunkinboi3yr
    Commented

    Ahhhh nooo i need to wait again ?!? Keep it up dood. Im liking the build up of the story. its not too fast paced and I can appreciate the MC's effort in getting stronger.

    Ch 17 Three fools.
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    I'm a man, so how did I end up as Sakura Haruno ?.
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  • dunkinboi
    dunkinboi3yr
    Commented

    welp technically i too wouldn't want to die. If im taken out of my world tjat I consider peaceful then thrown to the naruto world, yah i to dont wanna die. Canon fodder it is then!

    "And my dream for the future is, not to die and to live happily, peacefully without difficulty." You can include that in going back to my world. I don't know if I will be able to survive without my animes, manga and novel.
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    I'm a man, so how did I end up as Sakura Haruno ?.
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  • dunkinboi
    dunkinboi3yr
    Commented

    pfft

    "How about you introduce yourself first sensei?." I sigh, why do I have to keep saying everything? I'm almost turning into the supporting role that Sakura is, I need to get out of this.
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    I'm a man, so how did I end up as Sakura Haruno ?.
    Anime & Comics · Just_A_Chuunibyou
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  • dunkinboi
    dunkinboi3yr
    Commented

    bahahaha butthurt!

    "Tch ..." Even Sasuke seemed to be angry. Did I hurt his princess pride ?.
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    I'm a man, so how did I end up as Sakura Haruno ?.
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  • dunkinboi
    dunkinboi3yr
    Commented

    bruh u kinda forgettinf ur a kid too 😆

    "I don't want to. How can our Sensei be the only one to be late?. Everyone has already met his Sensei and went on some adventures, even Iruka-Sensei left." Well, I already expected this. This is Kakashi what would you expect from him? But you don't really have to act like that, it's kind of childish.
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    I'm a man, so how did I end up as Sakura Haruno ?.
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  • dunkinboi
    dunkinboi3yr
    Commented

    Ino tsuntsun~

    "Now you owe me one." I murmur and look at Saura with a little anger, yet I sit next to her. In fact Sakura you now owe me two, if I am not here what do you think they are going to do to you, you idiot.
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    I'm a man, so how did I end up as Sakura Haruno ?.
    Anime & Comics · Just_A_Chuunibyou
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  • dunkinboi
    dunkinboi3yr
    Posted

    Keep it up dood! Im hoping there's no harem route tho. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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    I'm a man, so how did I end up as Sakura Haruno ?.
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  • dunkinboi
    dunkinboi3yr
    Commented

    Hahahaha TOO FRIENDLY I MUST SAY!!!!

    Ch 14 Cybelle meets Seraphina
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    I Will Not Become Your Slave!!
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  • dunkinboi
    dunkinboi3yr
    Commented

    lmaooooo

    Ch 12 Lies become truth
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    I Will Not Become Your Slave!!
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  • dunkinboi
    dunkinboi3yr
    Commented

    Lowkey its kinda cringey. You just kept adding stuff to make your mc more op, but you're doing it in not a good way. Too rushed. Give the mc some time to introduce themselves to us. Not dropping this kind of stuff so suddenly. I hope I don't come as mean, but I gotta criticize that type of narrating.

    What I saw made me question my own existence. When I came to the conclusion that I had been reincarnated, I logically thought i was still in my own world. I might be a weeb but the reason I believed in reincarnation wasn't because of manga or fanfics but because I was a Buddhist. I was raised and trained in a Shaolin Temple. I didn't believe in anime worlds because I was a logical person.
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    Reincarnated in bleach without a system
    Anime & Comics · that_guy_hu_writes
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  • dunkinboi
    dunkinboi3yr
    Commented

    wapwapwapwap

    "It appears that I am aroused"
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    Endless adventure: A Fairy Tail Fanfic
    Anime & Comics · Archer_Phoenix
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  • dunkinboi
    dunkinboi3yr
    Commented

    Preferrably no harem, but anyways nice chap

    Ch 1 Ch.1 God
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    Livin' Free : A One Piece Fanfic(HIATUS)
    Anime & Comics · Imain_69
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  • dunkinboi
    dunkinboi3yr
    Commented

    Pls somebody cast a memory spell at me so i can forget this whole chapter and reread it again huhuhu

    Ch 45 chapter 45
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    Endless adventure: A Fairy Tail Fanfic
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