NorNoga4dm1n
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NorNoga4dm1n8mthCommentedCh 2708 Historic Event (Part 2)- NorNoga4dm1n3yrCommentedCh 104 Struggling (2)
- NorNoga4dm1n3yrReplied to JertiCh 104 Struggling (2)
- NorNoga4dm1n3yrCommentedCh 95 Family Matters
- NorNoga4dm1n3yrReplied to hadiexCh 95 Family Matters
- NorNoga4dm1n3yrReplied to unknown0000100Ch 24 What Is Weak?
- NorNoga4dm1n3yrCommentedCh 24 What Is Weak?
- NorNoga4dm1n3yrCommentedCh 5 Chapter 5
- NorNoga4dm1n3yrReplied to dandariousCh 88 There and Back Again
- NorNoga4dm1n3yrCommentedCh 88 There and Back Again
- NorNoga4dm1n3yrCommented
yea, it is a bit confusing
After returning to the Academy, life once again resumed its routine, with only a couple of changes. Lith obtained from the girls to be trained in sword arts, and in exchange Phloria would take part in his silent magic private lessons. - NorNoga4dm1n3yrCommented
ok, nitpicking again, but I think you were going for "one 'man's trash is anothers treasure". however, the way this was stated was not easy to comprehend on my first pass
During spring, animals would change their coats, and deer would shed their antlers. What for him was a treasure for them was garbage, so they had no reason to deny his request. - NorNoga4dm1n3yrCommented
I understand that this may be a nitpick, but the first sentence of this paragraph flow better in my mind as "Both *of* the crafting...
Both the crafting disciplines were very hard to convert into true magic. - NorNoga4dm1n3yrCommentedCh 3 Chapter 3
- NorNoga4dm1n3yrCommentedCh 2 Chapter 2
- NorNoga4dm1n3yrReplied to XhandasCh 85 Lith’s Surprise