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    Good story but needs to be edited severely. An example at the beginning- the wife's appearance is "indescribable" but then is described right after. The dialogue seems stiff and there is an overuse of exclamation points

    Ch 2 A husband is not so mighty!
    I got summoned to another world, then married a yandere!
    Fantasy · Sixth
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