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Ugh definitely worse.. I've read a few chapters ahead and it's getting increasingly difficult to read since quite a few sentences need to be re-read to be understood or words used are strange making the whole dialog unnatural... while general translation is ok, much polishing is needed, maybe the editor giving it another look would be a good idea..
How stupid.. instead of hiding her cards and winning a few more rounds by bluffing, she chose to flaunt herself... I'm really disappointed in how author portrays her one way and then writes her to do something that is completely contradictory to the smart cunning persona as businesswoman she's supposed to have
So, one observation I have to make: In my opinion, instead of asking them to trust her, gazing into their eyes etc, she could've just told them something like: 'It's a monster comprised of different beings, the most dangerous is Flesh hound that is driven by hunger and will target those that bleed. I know how to fight one, follow my lead. ' Anyways, I'm liking this novel so far, keep up the great work, author! :)