Leyphon
Hello all, I am just a novice writer and am not very good. But it's okay because I enjoy reading! Writing too but not as much as reading! I hope you all enjoy your time here on webnovel! :)
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Should be "hated person" not "hateful person". Saying hatefull person implies that Yman is the one doing the hating.
Never enjoyed the sexual descriptions/scenes of writings so I'm glad you aren't going to focus on it.
Honestly I think the author doesn't know how stats work as the stats are already in the thousands for regular adventurers. Def gonna be a problem later on. Also he uses different terms and pronouns for the same things or ppl which could be chalked up the incorrect translating but 10 chapters in and completely lost interest. Everything just falls into the main characters lap with literally 0 effort.
Honestly just take the last 0 out and it'll make more sense.