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This is my honest comment. Like so many others have stated constructively. Please tell us the story without the cigarette smoking. You appear to be a good writer. Your writing is not loaded with graphic language and action. But, you need to get to the point. Too much emphasis on smoking.
This book had many plots in the lives of the parents and it ended abruptly Then it came to the life of their son and his love story that ended without a concludion. Note to the author: Every story has an ending. Why is this book ended without a conclusion to the story of. The young people? I have noticed this style in your writing styles. Leaves an impressio the writer’s imagination dried up.
Humans never appreciate what they have until they loose it. That is true of both sexes. They abused her in that family but she was always from a wealthy family and hid those facts. Smart girl.