JustZisGuy
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phrasing sounds good but is utterly incomprehensible
Sure would be nice to have had a summary of the different ranks and abilities. At times it feels like the author is just making this up as they go. That does not end well
Yup, power of the MC has been a rapid yoyo.
Where's the POW or BIFF or SLAM? Alas, poor Adam West, you've been forgotten...
Hmmmm, rather weak way to pull him into the race for the exotics. Something that was focused on the rare materials he couldnt get (say ... prior shipment hijacked and needed that mats for an important order) or being in the area and pulled in by accident. But this, not seeing it . not much concern for the past months and now?
Close only counts in horseshoes and Striker mechs in the future...
And this is why he is drinking away his loss.
The ending felt ... forced. Very forced. Through the fight, nothing about the OFFENSIVE capabilities of the mech. Speed isn't just running speed, but quickness, weapon speed, reaction time. Taking the blow with a twist to shift the momentum followed by a quick counter. Disengage and the quickly re-engage. And the forces ending? That was just sad. Concede? WHY? No explanation given WHEN IT SHOULD HAVE BEEN. Some hit about overheating, but nothing about the effects on the mech. THAT should have been the decider here, not some throw in the towel cop-out. Not the author's best effort.
perfect combination for the x-factor!
And you missed the compliment from System...
that's almost too logical
do... used car sales then
this is getting stupid. the author is cleat a frustrated adolescent boy.
ahh, the cockiness of youth.