Webnovel Author: patrick_john_yu

patrick_john_yu

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patrick_john_yu2yr
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i just give up and maybe permanently drop this
Ch 4 4 energy gathering
Unknowingly Cultivate a Experimental Cultivation technique
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patrick_john_yu2yr
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patrick_john_yu2yr
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I will write my ideas in my draft but maybe if I find someone or if I finish writing the ending I will fix it then pose it again
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patrick_john_yu2yr
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i agree to your review cause i am really bad at writing and i am not a literature and I don't know what to write about others cause i write what is in my imagination and sorry for the grammar i did not really my forte i got an average grade in school but i forgotten the lesson very easily
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patrick_john_yu2yr
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thank you for reminding me
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sorry I just realize my blunder of using him not her
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patrick_john_yu2yr
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ok I try thank you for your opinion
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patrick_john_yu2yr
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I modify some parts and thank you for giving me a word count on the second chapter
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patrick_john_yu2yr
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thank you
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patrick_john_yu2yr
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this is my first novel and definitely not a novelist. I'm only creating this for my fun and sorry for my grammar because I am only a reader not a writer. English or any thing that require me to write something is not my strength.
Unknowingly Cultivate a Experimental Cultivation technique
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patrick_john_yu2yr
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😂😂😂😂😂
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Rest in Peaces
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patrick_john_yu2yr
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erasing memories without concent and brainwashing can you call yourself friends after that.
Ch 4 "Friends"
Remilitarization.
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patrick_john_yu2yr
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there are misssing space right here and the other chapters its confusing so can you fix it author
Yao Si felt that there was something wrong with her recently. She used to sleep like a brick, so even roaring thunder couldn't affect her slumber. But oddly enough, she couldn't seem to fall asleep for the last couple days, and what was even more strange was that she felt energetic and in good spirits despite the sleepless nights.
My Dad Is the Galaxy's Prince Charming
Sci-fi · You Qian
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patrick_john_yu2yr
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92,000
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The Only Leveling System
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patrick_john_yu3yr
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❤
Ch 41 The Vegetation Spirit
My Master Disconnected Yet Again
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patrick_john_yu3yr
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Ch 38 Guests from the Upper World
My Master Disconnected Yet Again
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