Wasted a chapter

Is this the story? What a waste of chapters

Over far too soon and felt rushed at the end. Would have been 5 stars if the end had felt natural

Finished far too quickly as I would have loved to see more of ray and what happened to nior

Totally ruins the flow

Waste of 2 chapters

2 chapters wasted again… stats appearing far too often and is just lazy writing

When I see bonus chapter I just skip it as it’s just a copy and paste of the stats again… such lazy writing

Don’t think I’ll read much more if it keeps copying and pasting stats Al the time

Are you kidding me… 2 chapters in a row of just stats… what a waste of time

Ffs another wasted chapter on stats

Another wasted chapter

Stats stats stats… every chapter and it’s becoming annoying now I hope this doesn’t carry on as it’s ruining the flow

Would be really good if the stats didn’t repeat every chapter…

Just wasted my token on this chapter

This is not making sense.. he knows what his most useful stats are but you say as he a noob to games he can’t calculate damage by himself?? He also had several years as a deva and didn’t pick up the basics like how much damage a lvl 10, 20 or 30 could do etc plus he made it to staff Sargent in the army so how come he has no self defence training. Also if he’s as strong as indicated a 3 meter giant wouldn ’t be an issue as he would smash his ankles up first and use his agili ty to keep out of the way. And he had a year so why not get credit cards, loans etc to the max if it didn’t matter in 12 months… Should have had him turn up of the scientist and had limited time to get to the first don… that would have made more sense than a year

So the story is average at the moment and a little slow with whole sections from other chapters published again, I’m thinking stats for the belt etc which we were just told. He had a whole year before anyone else and it seems to be wasted as he used have trained in weapons and martial arts as he already knew his weaknesses from before even if he wanted to be a fire mate again he would have knew what to work on. should have one weapon of each type and know how to box at least before the year was out.

Oook

It ended… I was looking forward to the game opening up for everyone at some stage and seeing what Sherlock did with the money

I love this book as the players are hilar ious as they do as players do…