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This could have and probably will get better, but I don't have the patience to continue. I will list why I'm not continuing this story - Mc is a (dumb) eight year old in a 21 year old body (is that his age, I'm not going back to check). - I would have hunted the same way but I would have used my intelligence but he doesn't have any. Nope that it, if you had made him a bit smarter I would have continued. Good luck on your next story........[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]