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Kenneth_Welever11mthCommentedmentioned a grand total of once that he would look into martial arts when he first arrived in the mortal realm and inspected his troops....
[Physical Body: Innate Stage Tier 3 martial artist]- Kenneth_Welever11mthCommented
it's because he is a pathetic worm with no spine. go with your first instinct. I'd have gone to the sect leader and applied to leave the sect entirely to avoid his obnoxious daughter and I'd have phrased it exactly that way. telling him I'd rather run the risk of being caught by a demonic sect and turned into a pill furnace than having my cultivation interrupted every 5-10 days by his brat.a gifted alchemist can name his price in any sect. one of them will enforce his solitude while encouraging him to produce pills of greater strength
Why was that when it came to him, he was the one being madly toyed with by the beautiful women? Could it be that he didn't have a majestic aura, nor the effect of making these beauties love-blind? - Kenneth_Welever1yrReplied to Nathan_Smead
With great power comes greater stupidity.
Only covered by Artan's finger when he looked at it. - Kenneth_Welever1yrReplied to Celtend
She started way ahead of him and if she doesn't stay ahead for a while she gonna fall way behind.
"Reward has been rolled. The passive skill [Blessing of the Tetraelemental Tempest] has been acquired." - Kenneth_Welever1yrCommented
I thought her name was Taylor?
"Tyler is here to see you, Chelsea," I heard Yuri say, making me look up. - Kenneth_Welever1yrCommented
We must attempt as much. FOR SCIENCE!!!!!
Donavens grandchild, or even Great Grandchild, was a tall man almost towering over me at six foot three and stood close enough that I would have to crane my head. His smile was polite and even inviting as he tried to cozy up with me and more or less ask my women to back off. Mally wasn't having much of that, and neither was Emily, with them both holding onto an Arm. That didn't mean Asahi, Trisha, Tina, Rose, Kate, Alexia, and Yuri, were happy about it. Betsy was finding the drinks to her liking, and I couldn't help in the back of my head if she drank enough, would I be able to get drunk off her milk? - Kenneth_Welever1yrReplied to THE_4TH
Ahh the follies of youth. Such a simple solution without ever seeing it.
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I believe this chapter is in the wrong place. It appears she is still on the boat while the last chapter she was leaving the boat.....
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I think you meant Alchemist instead of Enchanter since Chelsea just got done explaining why alchemy wouldn't be a solution.
"Wonderful! An enchanter, too; I have met someone that actually is pretty smart. I wouldn't dare try anything with the Succubus Queen here if that makes you feel better." Taylor said, and I snorted. - Kenneth_Welever1yrReplied to Drakon_Drakar
She has to get her necrofreak on at some point. Might as well start here.
"Fascinating," I smiled and couldn't help but question something. "I have to ask this question then," I began, "Taylor," I continued slowly addressing the Liches name, "Are you male or female, and what race are you?" I asked. - Kenneth_Welever1yrReplied to dethrophes
Hackles = The hairs, spines or feathers of an animal, (Normally along the back) which are raised when the creature in question is distressed. Heckles = plural of Heckle. verb of the descriptor heckler. It's what happens when people in the audience mock standing comedians. Easy to get the two confused.
"Incorrect," The Lich replied with a smile sitting back down on a crate, "Only those raised with manipulation of mana to raise the dead into zombies and skeletons will you. Or even Liches if they didn't choose to be raised from the dead. Those like myself who became a Lich on their own terms and created their own phylactery to preserve their body so they may continue to explore the depths of mana will not raise your instincts." The Lich explained, "I am the only one I know who uses Life Necromancy, and so I looked into why and haven't quite come to a conclusion. The fact that undead makes your skin crawl seems to be an automatic response from every living creature I have discovered. Fascinating research, I guarantee you." The Lich stopped. - Kenneth_Welever1yrCommented
"I said, my voice muffled in my breasts" is incorrect. While this could be an inner thought of possessiveness over Rose's breasts the sentence should be "I said, my voice muffled in her breasts" indicating that Chelsea is indicating Rose and not mushing her head into her own breasts.
Deeper frowns showed, and I got up and turned myself, letting my face fall into Rose's breasts. "Forget that," I said, my voice muffled in my breasts, "Let's have some fun back in the room!" I said loudly. - Kenneth_Welever1yrCommented
"We wouldn't be unable to win" is a double negative here. Unless you are wishing to imply that winning would be possible but slim which doesn't fit with the rest of the paragraph you should use "We would be unable to win" or "We wouldn't be able to win"
The more I thought about it, the more I knew that we wouldn't survive a long-term war with the Empire without the help of allies. Without the Demon Lands fully declaring war and mobilizing against the Empire, we wouldn't be unable to win. I knew in my heart and mind it would come down to a simple yet serious problem. - Kenneth_Welever1yrReplied to dethrophes
Maybe it was "Hostilities"? I could see autocorrect flubbing the two.
The sudden eruption of festivities between the two surprised me, and the glare told me this was a long time coming. - Kenneth_Welever1yrCommented
She has a system granted book on the void she is blatently NOT studying.
I frowned as I meditated, now letting mana soak into my whirlpools, collecting mana easily as I thought. No, the void was something of a mystery that I needed to solve on my own slowly. I never heard of a wizard tower that focused on the void even though it was known all over. - Kenneth_Welever1yrCommented
Ending of the third sentence. You wrote water efforts instead of war efforts.
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I think you mean "fiery red head" not firey read head" The first word is simply misspelled while the second words are homonyms. They can sound the same but mean something completely different.
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"What.. a waste." Reginald painfully squeezed from his lips. "That should have been my expert mech…"