There are only a few grammar issues, but overall the English grammar is really good!! The story was built pretty well. It was easy to get into the story. The character design was alright and the story development was pretty good. Overall i like the premis of it. Keep it up!

Correction: *presice! you had a . after the !

Correction: *then to the right

Correction: *got him to face

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I love books like these. They really make my imagination run wild. Imma keep reading this and so should everyone who comes across this book. This book feels like it fits mystory more than fantasy but both definitely work well together. I hope people don't just assume this is like any other book they see or read.

This book uses clichés in a good way that makes it more unique from it's competition and counter parts. It uses what's already made to flip it and make it different but similar to, and from, others. It has a little bit of comedy and is balanced pretty well. I instantly got hooked into it. So yeah, if you're a new reader then just give it a read. You don't have to listen to me buuut.....i'm sure you'd want to read it.

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WHOAA!!!! WHOA WHOA!! You mean to tell me you didn't read this? Read it! It's actually good. If you don't believe me then read the synopsis. Just read it. I'll be waiting. I'll be right here. Waiting for you to come back and read this review just to realise that you need to read this book. Okay look. I know that i only read the synopsis but it felt like i should read it. It just felt like i should read the story, okay? I mean......it seems like a pretty good book to me. So why wouldn't it to you? I'm just a guy who does what he does. So take my word for it and give it a go. And if you don't like it? Then it was your choice to do it. I am just words on the screen. I can't force you to do anything. You made the choice and if you don't like my review then make your own review and prove me wrong.......or right. You never know. I could be right. I could be. Which is why you should read it! We all wanna find the people that we love when they go missing. This book could possibly help with that. So just give it a go. I'll still just be words on the screen. Now if you've made it this far then you should take the time to read the book. Regardless of what i say. And if you don't like my review then you should definitely read the book so you can make your own review. Just saying you should do what you want. But you should definitely read the book. Or maybe you won't. Who knows? Only you would. But if you review then you can let everyone know that you reviewed this book, and have read at least some part of it. Anything after this you can skip. Or should you? Only you can or will decide that. Because i sure can't. Or can i? I could be apart of the matrix! I could be apart of this book. I could be trapped inside of this book. How do i know that i'm not? Only you would know. But how do you know that you're not inside of another book that this book is inside of? You may never know. Or do you? If you do let me know because i would very much like to know. Okay seriously this is gettimg repetitive. Maybe even annoying. But if it was annoying then you wouldn't be here right now. Now would you? No you wouldn't. You reaching this point just tells me that i am pretty interesting. Which is why you should read this book. It's a pretty good book. Don't you agree? Well if you didn't agree then you wouldn't be here reading this review now would you? No you wouldn't. So just read it already. Go on! Read the book! Read it. Please? Okay. I'm pretty sure you've read it by now. You did, right? Yeah you did. But did you though? Because i'm not really sure that you did. So maybe you should scroll down to just check and see if you did. Just hit the read button and maybe read it until you reach where you was last at and then come back here to give it your own review. I mean....you never know, right? You always wanna be sure. Because how would you not know if you read a book without double checking if you did. You know sometimes you just gotta read it 3 times to be sure. You never know now a days. Anything can happen. This was posted here on December the twenty fourth of twenty-twenty

I am a new reader to this story, and this book instantly caught my interest. I will be reading it for a while now. Especially since it sounds like a story that could be relatable. I only read the synopsis but it felt like i should read it. Just from the synopsis and only the synopsis. It felt like i should read the story. Anyone who wants to find a unique story, a story to read just to pass the time, or a story to read out of bored. If you are any of those, then this is the story for you. Also, i think that the synopsis was realistic. If you trust a stranger then your life can go upside down easily. At any time of your life. And you won't see it coming. Trusting people you don't know can be hard. Which is why we socialize. We do it so we can get to know one another and eventually trust each other. Life is like that in it's weird ways. Always full of surprises that you don't see it coming. Having your own expectations blown away, shattered, or met to the exact thought. It's really relatable in that aspect. And marriage is a tough and rough road for a lot of people but not for everyone. If you're not big on romance then this story may surprise you. Because it surprised me. If you've made it this far then you should take the time to read the book. Regardless of what i say. And if you don't like my review then you should definitely read the book so you can make your own review. Just saying you should do what you want. But you should definitely read the book. Or maybe you won't. Who knows? Only you would. But if you review then you can let everyone know that you reviewed this book, and have read at least some part of it. Anything after this you can skip. Or should you? Only you can or will decide that. Because i sure can't. Or can i? I could be apart of the matrix! I could be apart of this book. I could be trapped inside of this book. How do i know that i'm not? Only you would know. But how do you know that you're not inside of another book that this book is inside of? You may never know. Or do you? If you do let me know because i would very much like to know. Okay seriously this is gettimg repetitive. Maybe even annoying. But if it was annoying then you wouldn't be here right now. Now would you? No you wouldn't. You reaching this point just tells me that i am pretty interesting. Which is why you should read this book. It's a pretty good book. Don't you agree? Well if you didn't agree then you wouldn't be here reading this review now would you? No you wouldn't. So just read it already. Go on! Read the book! Read it. Please? Oh come on! I'm begging you please! Read the book! I'm a comedian trying to read such a relatable book like this one. So to keep it going. Please read it. Pleeeeaaaassseee. Okay. I'm pretty sure you've read it by now. You did, right? Yeah you did. But did you though? Because i'm not really sure that you did. So maybe you should scroll down to just check and see if you did. Just hit the read button and maybe read it until you reach where you was last at and then come back here to give it your own review. I mean....you never know, right? You always wanna be sure. Because how would you not know if you read a book without double checking if you did. You know sometimes you just gotta read it 3 times to be sure. You never know now a days. Anything can happen. This was posted here on December the twenty fourth of twenty-twenty.