I was really upset when they character suicided The Devil in the later chapters of the story. The terrible grammar and spelling errors drive me Nuts. but over all it’s still a good read.

I completely agree, I Ship Bai and Curtis too.

Really refreshing comic! I highly recommend. Bai’s character development is relatable. And the art is lovely. Just a heads up there is ***** content in this book, Its for 18+.

Can the editor please fix all the thoughts to taught? It’s getting very annoying as I read this novel that there are so many grammar errors....

Helping verbs need to be tensed right here, Editor. Please review these chapters and correct it. A novel needs to be written well, and your correcting of these small adjustments are needed to make this story more appealing to new readers.

The editor if this novel is doIng a swell job. Its made a big impact on my enjoyment of this story. Keep up yje good work.

Who ever is editing this story, It’s “ taught “ not “ thought”. There’s a lot of spelling errors. However, the story is still engaging.

Lothaire has blue eyes, It’s not the devil thats following her. My guess its another mix breed like Heaven, or perhaps an angel, or a really old demon. I certainly hope they explain what happened to Lothaire, and the idenity of the silver eyed man.