It should read "piques their interests" and not picked their interests. American English translation

I agree with the capture and farming of Ether mosquitoes. Pretty good idea! The only bait seems to be Ether and Daneel already has a natural Ether chamber.

A Farmer Host would be similar to a Dude Ranch here in the United States of North America

They're Doc Martin boots, not Dr. Martin. Doc is Western slang for Dr.

Thank you for the explanations of Chinese cultural practices. As a Westerner it is a way of understanding the reference. It helps to understand your inflections and meanings. Excellent English by the way, Kudos to you!

Excellent translation and proofreading. Keep up the great writing![img=recommend]

Hopefully as their newly elected leader Lyth is able to open their minds about what it means to lead while teaching them how to do the same for the next time they are saddled with inexperienced troops, or whatever situation they find themselves in. I am a veteran and can tell you five three man squads that react in unison are a very strong force when the need arises.

Certainly. Thank you for the attention. I'll start noting the errors. Would you like entire sentences, or just the misspelled section?

I like the way you wrapped up the first book with the lead into the next book giving us readers a lot of possibilities as to the development of the main character. Hopefully I'll just have to have to scroll up for the next book as I do not see the name for it.

When the idea of proof was presented I thought maybe that the riders and their horses were going to be stored in the space pack and then carefully staged so as to expose the truth of who sent them as well as what they were ordered to do.

Are you having anyone proofread your chapters for translation purposes? I've been noticing misused words in sentences. There are also descriptive words without a bridge word between them. The story is good, the missing bridge words and wrong words in the sentencing does throw the story off though. I am reading a translated to North American English though.

In the paragraph where Quinn's being thought about by the girl? and he seems determined to strike Omon and your translation says defiantly it should read definitely

As an experienced web novel reader have you offered edits to correct the cliches you are seeing? Are you viewing these on a computer or handheld device? I'm currently using my cell phone. Any info about editing would most likely be helpful. The thing I notice is the miswording in the story due to translation errors. I am reading these in American English.

As I don't buy coins, and am reading multiple web novels, please do not be dispirited when I only vote for your novel once a week. Thank You for writing such interesting chapters, and flushing out the side characters with the main character. It makes the Novel much more interesting, plus it makes me (us) wonder if there might be other novels(novelist collaboration) about the other characters as well?

Any chance there will be drawings of the different creatures?

The mission and status logs are pretty handy. They allow us readers to understand the character development. Other than weapons, skills, and experience, do battles result in knowledge?

You would think basic skills in making utensils should increase a skill. Possibly we could see these developments in the character?

Why aren't there more chapters? Are all of these books from the same author? Are there any complete books?