Lil_1234
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2020-08-23 JoinedUnited States
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Lil_12343yrReplied to oirCheerio6Ch 300 Cell room- Part 2- Lil_12343yrCommentedCh 300 Cell room- Part 2
- Lil_12343yrCommentedCh 298 Acceptance- Part 3
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This book has a great storyline with well developed characters. The author has a good understanding of the time period and updates chapters on a regular basis. The story can be somewhat slow moving at times, but the author makes good use of cliffhangers to keep the reader interested. There are some small grammarical errors, but they are not too distracting.
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Bad dog Maddox!
Before James could do anything, the wolf at the front jumped towards him, biting his leg and making him cry out loud in pain as its teeth sunk into his flesh. Hearing him scream, the cemetery caretaker quickly made his way there with the torch of fire in his hand. The wolves growled again, but they didn't stay near James as they promptly fled back to the forest. - Lil_12343yrReplied to Lupe_RodarteCh 250 Meddler- Part 2
- Lil_12343yrCommentedCh 216 Blaring keys and sighs- Part 2
- Lil_12343yrCommentedCh 212 Sitting with you- Part 2
- Lil_12343yrReplied to JasmeetsawhneyCh 205 Spark of fire
- Lil_12343yrCommentedCh 205 Spark of fire
- Lil_12343yrCommentedCh 201 What you wish for- Part 4
- Lil_12343yrCommented
Uh oh!
Calhoun's eyes had narrowed, "It would be bad if Madeline found out." - Lil_12343yrReplied to ash_knight17
- Lil_12343yrReplied to Sarah_IvesCh 128 On the table- Part 2
- Lil_12343yrCommentedCh 70 Chapter 10