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DaoistwOqXyh18dCommentedCh 19 19. Little Dragon- DaoistwOqXyh22dCommentedCh 8 City of the Sun!
- DaoistwOqXyh23dReplied to Stygrxn
Btw i dont know Boruto villains except they are Otsutsuki you should also genderbend them,Tailed Beasts too also dont make other villages leaders or villagers show outright hostility or rudeness if you make his mom Naruko or FemSasuke they are basically unstoppable so insulting mc is a really bad idea for them
Ch 45 Rewriting: Need Feedback - DaoistwOqXyh26dReplied to Stygrxn
I think he should stay in Konoha Naruko could just have her clones protect him,or just protect him herself also would be better if Boruto didnt have mom issues Naruko can again spam clones to do her work also i would like it if things had always been this reverse world instead of appearing recently.
Ch 46 Final Suggestions - Deleting Chapters - DaoistwOqXyh26dCommentedCh 46 Final Suggestions - Deleting Chapters
- DaoistwOqXyh27dCommented
Its an interesting book very unique hope it doesnt go the way of "mc eventually surpasses Zeus and can solo everything" genderbending gods and then relying on them and their love for him to climb the hiearachy is better and funnier than a broken system that gives him enough broken powers to overthrow the Olympians.
Ch 4 Chapter 4: You Must Be a Goddess, Right? - DaoistwOqXyh27dCommented
Goddesses or Gods? Does he think Apollo is male or female?
Eros was frustrated. Was he destined to clash with goddesses? - DaoistwOqXyh27dCommented
Did he get even more handsome now?
[Your charm value has increased significantly, and others' goodwill towards you has doubled, and this effect can critical hit non-human races.] - DaoistwOqXyh27dCommented
"and" is wrong btw
Although Zeus could single-handedly support all the gods and Olympus, he really couldn't be relied on for this kind of thing. - DaoistwOqXyh27dCommented
support or beat?
Although Zeus could single-handedly support all the gods and Olympus, he really couldn't be relied on for this kind of thing. - DaoistwOqXyh28dReplied to StygrxnCh 45 Rewriting: Need Feedback
- DaoistwOqXyh29dCommentedCh 20 Moons?
- DaoistwOqXyh1mthCommented
Did they actually die or will we see cliche "your mother is a sect master in upper realm,she was taken away by her family,Your father is some heavenly genius"m
Li Qinghou's soul traveled through time and was born in Niujia Village at the foot of Wanxia Mountain. His parents died, but he had a sister and a house. His sister was a good sister, but unfortunately the house was just a broken thatched house with leaks everywhere. - DaoistwOqXyh1mthCommented
Whats the point if he isnt going to be a rich young master that gets pampered by his mom?
This book has been deleted. - DaoistwOqXyh1mthCommented
How strong would the created being be if he used all of Divine Merit for a single being?
He actually summoned a lot more than the three currently in pursuit, the flash of light affected the entire realm, creating a total of five hundred canine. Their strength was around the mid-stage of body tempering, and coupled with their high numbers, would serve as an effective source of danger for the foreseeable future. - DaoistwOqXyh1mthCommented
Does faith strengthening have limits? and he has to do some other things to level up at some point than just faith
[A/N: Sorry for the delay. I lost a little motivation this week but I'm back at it. Also there was some comments about how Maui's powers are faith based and if he loses faith he would be weak again. No, his power isnt dependent on faith. His growth of divine powers is based on faith, he wouldnt lose his strength if no one believed in him. His divinity just wouldnt grow further. Just wanted to clear up that confusion.