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Also, Quinn is not in the room to copy his ability or MC points.
where souls go after they're dead.
I think the move was already planned before the news about Helen. The leaders brought the devices for marking the new home of the vampires with them when Quinn summoned them. Quinn had already spoken about moving the vampire settlement.
Not that the Dalki care, but something that large will cause problems for the planets in the system. Something that large will have a significant gravity field. Just a little nudge could cause a planet to go out of its orbit. This would throw off the other planets too. This could destroy all life on those planets and possibly destroy a some planets too.
...a meeting of their own.
massive amount
Big surprise, I think the word is misspelled. Probably should be Rex Immortiu. This means King of the Immortals. Could also be Rex Immortis, which would make him the Immortal King.
I am wondering if Arthur is only living long enough to take out those responsible for killing the Punishers. After he has achieved this, he will let himself be killed or go back into eternal slumber.
The first sentence is incomplete. Here is one idea might help, “Due to the situation, the leaders did not know what to do.”
…his boy’s bod…
The lab actually belonged to Jim Eno. He was the one who created the Dalki.
For pronoun agreement the phrase should be, "he lost more of his strength." or "it lost more of its strength."
...threat they posed...
their
The mother held the baby in her hands...
The one thing that disabling Quinn’s system does that is very useful is the inspect skill. It can identify things and tell what those things do. Think about all the times Quinn’s system identified beast and items. Quinn has used his system to open digitally locked doors. So yes, not being able use his system is a huge problem for Quinn.
…people knew her for.
More than 10% were killed. Decimate means to reduce by 1/10. So annihilate would be a better word.