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Dimencia3yrCommentedAh... Sweet dreams.
Elated by his achievement, for a second Harun forgot about the hidden forces plotting against him—coiling on himself as pictures of his past all-dominating form swirled in his mind. This time he would go beyond the World-Devouring level, become a Mythical Beast, eat the sun and moon, eat the Three-Legged Crow Clan, eat the Fourth Heaven, eat the...- Dimencia3yrCommented
Still there, I see...
"Ah! This stupid array formation is simply way… too… irritating!" - Dimencia3yrCommented
Will the writing style improve since we are done with introductions?
'And that's how I died… Trapped in a game and killed by the system that was supposed to help me,' - Dimencia3yrCommented
Is he really a software engineer, working at the same time, when the game was released? "Working professional"? Or has he already transmigrated from the ancient past? Looks unrealistic, something needs to go.
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Too much Divinity for one chapter. =)
Just like everyone in the world, Ryder was also excited about the first virtual reality game 'Divinity'. There were already some rumors about the price. If rumors were to be believed, then the prices were not too expensive, but they weren't too cheap either. Although he wasn't rich, he felt like he could afford it. - Dimencia3yrPosted
Overall it's a good novel to read. Characters may look inconsistent, but you can always make some excuse for them, like "it's because of the plot" or "I don't get it, but I'm not a side character". Reading is fun, not boring and cliffhangers spoil your working hours. Even so the novel doesn't strike you with innovative approach(but who knows, I'm only at the 103 chapter), it does make your free time enjoyable.
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Personally, I don't get it. So, if I remember correctly, previously MC said, that fighting was cool. Well, ooook..... Lame reasoning, but if you are bored of magic... But look at that, he isn't bored! I don't get this flimsy character.
It was night when he emerged. At this time, the sweltering heat turned into a blissful warmth. However, the already suffocating humidity more than doubled its intensity. As he walked, parts of his pants stuck to his sides. His armor slid around his wet arms. Despite the uncomfortableness, the nighttime forest was pleasant to him. The black tree trunks and constantly swaying leaves blocked most of the moonlight. Shadows moved in the corner of his eyes. It was like he was back in his lonely dark home. He walked on his usual path back to the base. The guard let him up the elevator. - Dimencia3yrCommented
Looks hypocritical. Like a villain in a cheap drama: "I will not kill you when I can. But will moan and cry about inconveniences through all your growth. Be prepared".
"Then you will both need to separate." She pointed to the central landmass. "When the barrier dissolves, I'll search the main continent while you two get the east and west. I want him or whatever legacy he left behind destroyed." The two children nodded and tried to help pass the barrier ahead of time only to be pushed back. "I guess we have to wait." Maker summoned a chair and sat down. "Even after so much time he continues to be a thorn in my side."