Rewriting details in the next chapter that were previously written and differently. the back and forth, constantly, I'll give one star only.

Is there any way you can shorten the piracy statement? it takes up so much room 😭😓

100% hate it. I'd hate to quit reading it but I'm about to.

I think reiterating so much of the previous chapter makes me want to not even continue reading this story. and now the whole bottom half of the chapter is taken up by the anti-piracy statement. absolutely frustrating.

I hate that I am reading the same paragraphs I have already read.

the chapters are even shorter. ugh.

2nd time Alicia initiated a kiss.

I hope that's Lili like the flower